I'M Broken

My razor blade
It's always there
No matter what the situation
I reach in my pocket
And there it is
I pull it out
Make one cut 
All the      fades
I keep goin 
Each cut deeper
Don't stop
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Perkins Avatar
November 4, 2008 at 8:23 PM
no, im not still mad. and i dont know what that book is, sorry. and happy early birthday
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
November 3, 2008 at 5:57 PM
The cutting doesn't get better. You need to develop alternate coping skills. It is a coping skill, a negative one. Never be afraid to be you. Those who can't accept you as you are, are the ones who are wrong. Real love is unconditional and at times tough. You need to help you. It can't come from people feeling sorry for you but from people who will stand strong and keep caring. God Bless. (PRAY! He will.) Vince
Mcmorrow Avatar
November 2, 2008 at 6:42 PM
i gotta go, peace dude. just hang in there okay. things will get better
Mcmorrow Avatar
November 2, 2008 at 6:32 PM
well i dunno what you look like so i cant say you are or not
Mcmorrow Avatar
November 2, 2008 at 6:21 PM
well i turned 16 yesterday. and thats about it...
Mcmorrow Avatar
November 2, 2008 at 6:03 PM
i dont know what to do. when it happened to me i just stuck around. but only stick around if you can honestly see yourself with this person in your future until the end. if not, then i hardly think they are worth
Mcmorrow Avatar
November 2, 2008 at 5:42 PM
what do you wanna ask
Mcmorrow Avatar
November 2, 2008 at 5:21 PM
yeah... i guess whatever we were
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