I'M Broken

My razor blade It's always there No matter what the situation I reach in my pocket And there it is I pull it out Make one cut All the fades I keep goin Each cut deeper Don't stop

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Kyle Perkins

Date: 11/4/2008 8:23:00 PM

no, im not still mad. and i dont know what that book is, sorry. and happy early birthday

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 11/3/2008 5:57:00 PM

The cutting doesn't get better. You need to develop alternate coping skills. It is a coping skill, a negative one. Never be afraid to be you. Those who can't accept you as you are, are the ones who are wrong. Real love is unconditional and at times tough. You need to help you. It can't come from people feeling sorry for you but from people who will stand strong and keep caring. God Bless. (PRAY! He will.) Vince

Steven Mcmorrow

Date: 11/2/2008 6:42:00 PM

i gotta go, peace dude. just hang in there okay. things will get better

Steven Mcmorrow

Date: 11/2/2008 6:32:00 PM

well i dunno what you look like so i cant say you are or not

Steven Mcmorrow

Date: 11/2/2008 6:21:00 PM

well i turned 16 yesterday. and thats about it...

Steven Mcmorrow

Date: 11/2/2008 6:03:00 PM

i dont know what to do. when it happened to me i just stuck around. but only stick around if you can honestly see yourself with this person in your future until the end. if not, then i hardly think they are worth

Steven Mcmorrow

Date: 11/2/2008 5:42:00 PM

what do you wanna ask

Steven Mcmorrow

Date: 11/2/2008 5:21:00 PM

yeah... i guess whatever we were