I'M Breaking Up With You, Pd

I’m Breaking Up With You, P.D.
I’m breaking up with you, P.D. This is the very last poem you’ll ever get from me! So understand me, Poetry Diva, we’re seriously through! My husband will certainly leave me if I don’t leave you. Let me explain it like this, my lovely, lethal girlfriend, I’m so addicted to PoetrySoup, my marriage will soon end. I know for sure that you don’t care and you won’t cry, ‘Cause on to a better poetry lover you’ll quickly fly. Well, Deadly Destroyer, I'll see you around - - -someday maybe - But right now I’m breaking up with you, P.D., so this is “Hasta la Vista, Baby!”
06-11-2014 Contest: Any Poem #6 (03-13-2016) Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A Placement: 4th Contest: I’m Breaking Up With You (06-19-2014) Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A Placement: 1st
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A   Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 10:13 AM
Pandita, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you so much for supporting my contest. Stop by my blog "LAST CALL" if you like. ((( note from MEakaPD Thank you ALL for waiting and chilling, while I sat on the sideline. Since March 1st, I moved to the 4th largest city in the USA (by population.) One of the hardest decisions EVER-EVER!!! I will keep short on my visits until April 1st. After that, there's no holding me back LOL -unless God has other plans. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Sietesantos Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 10:48 AM
Linda, I am twice blessed to place again! Thank you and it is always my pleasure to support your contests!! Have a wonderful day! Pandita
A   Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 10:13 AM
ha, ha, Like this one again Pandita. PD
Sietesantos Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 10:49 AM
I am so happy that you still enjoy this special piece:-)! Thank you again, Linda!!! Pandita
Oule Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 8:34 AM
the theme is a hidden agenda, but its well written ...
Sietesantos Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 9:49 AM
Hi Bryan, it's good to hear from you! Thank you for complimenting this piece and I hope we will continue to check out each other's work. Warmest regards. Pandita
Bailey Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 6:48 AM
I love this piece Pandita :) - Regards "B"
Sietesantos Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 8:58 AM
Hi B, thank you so much for stopping by which I so very much appreciate. I am glad you enjoyed this piece which is one of my favorites! Warmest regards! Pandita
Ayala Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 8:18 PM
This is such a very clever, witty write! I Love it. Congratulations on an excellent win! Kika
Sietesantos Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 9:40 PM
Well this was one of my most fun pieces and I am very happy that you enjoyed reading it! Pandita
Situation Avatar
July 21, 2014 at 7:57 PM
Hahahahah. I wish I had entered this one.
Sietesantos Avatar
July 21, 2014 at 8:17 PM
Heheheh. I am sure you would have produced an excellent piece while having some good fun at the same time:-). Stay in touch!
Fekri Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 5:28 AM
Very nice and funny :D Love to read more of your great poems!
Sietesantos Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 1:25 PM
Hi Yasaman, my friend, thank you so much for visiting with me and thank you for your sweet compliments. Yes, please do look at some of my other works including "The Butterfly Flutters By" and others which you may enjoy! Have a wonderful weekend!
Lindley Avatar
June 22, 2014 at 1:19 PM
Congrats on your great win!!!!!
Sietesantos Avatar
June 22, 2014 at 2:18 PM
Thank you, my dear friend, Robert. I always appreciate hearing from you! Warmest regards.
A  Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 5:45 PM
A sweet, sweep under the rug break-up. Glad it's all in the name of fun. LOL... Congrats!!! SKAt
Sietesantos Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 7:22 PM
Hi SKAT, thank you so much for stopping by and for the wonderful compliments which I so very much appreciate. Yes, I had so much fun penning this piece! Warmest regards!
Torres Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 4:16 PM
haha... this is soooo good!!! .. I love it!! :O)) breaking up with PD is the hurtest and hardest thing to do... Congratulations on your win, Pandita!!! :O))
Sietesantos Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 4:44 PM
Thank you, Aiyah, for your sweet compliments! Yes, I had the best time penning this one! Thank you, my friend for your kind support! Warmest regards!
Michaels Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 5:28 AM
Brilliant! Great job and a wonderful sign off! Congrats on your win!
Sietesantos Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 6:35 AM
Hi John, I truly appreciate your wonderful compliments which mean a lot to me. Thanks for the encouragement. Warmest regards!
Maharaj Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 1:47 AM
Yay .. Congrats as well :)
Sietesantos Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 6:33 AM
Hi Sasha, thank you so much for stopping by and I appreciate your compliment. Warmest regards!
A. Sharma Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 11:32 PM
Wonderful poem Pandita ! Big Congrats on a merited win !
Sietesantos Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 2:01 PM
Hi Dr. Upma, thank you so much for stopping by and for the sweet compliments which I so very much appreciate. Warmest regards!
Dietrich Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 11:29 PM
awesome poem, Pandita and awesome win. You outdid yourself!!
Sietesantos Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 6:30 AM
Thank you dear Andrea for your always welcomed compliments. I really had a lot of fun doing this one and I guess it shows in the final product.Thank you, my friend, for your continued inspiration and support!
Macfarlane Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 8:21 PM
Pandita, this is excellent! Kind of like a slam breakup, was so much fun to read, love it. Big congrats!! Hugs
Sietesantos Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 10:21 PM
Hi Cecilia, thank you so much for stopping by and for the wonderful compliments which I so very much appreciate. Warmest regards!
Smith Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 7:32 PM
Stopping back with congrats
Sietesantos Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 7:51 PM
Thanks very much Tim for the kind compliments!
Nance Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 5:50 PM
What a fun break up! Grats on your win :)
Sietesantos Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 7:52 PM
Casarah, many thanks for your kind compliments!
Callus Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 5:35 PM
Congrats on your top podium, Pandita! But don't you think that it's time for that "grand reunion with a kiss and a hug"? // paul
Sietesantos Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 7:57 PM
Hi Paul, thank you so much, my friend for the great compliment. And you are absolutely right, it's time to do the make-up scene with a kiss and hug:-) LOL!
A   Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 2:27 PM
I'm glad you had fun Pandita... it was mighty fun for me as well...Linda
Jamoner Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 12:45 PM
I had fun reading this. Cool! Congratz for the win! : )
Sietesantos Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 12:59 PM
Hi Doris, thank you for stopping by with your lovely compliments! Best wishes.
Avey Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 11:59 AM
lethal girlfriend, love it!
Sietesantos Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 1:02 PM
Hi Sydney, I am so glad you enjoyed this special piece to dedicated to our P.D.! Thanks for visiting and for your compliments! Best wishes.
Hoffman Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 9:15 AM
Congrats on the win,nice poem
Sietesantos Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 9:52 AM
Thanks very much, Greg!
Johnson Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 9:12 AM
Congrats Pandita. Very pleased to see you placed high.
Sietesantos Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 9:53 AM
Thank you so very much, Robert!
May Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 8:35 AM
Congrats on a great win Pandita
Sietesantos Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 10:03 AM
Thank you so very much, Joseph, for your compliment!
Lamoureux Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 8:30 AM
This was fun, congratulations.
Sietesantos Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 10:00 AM
Thanks much, Richard, for the kind compliments! I really enjoyed this one!
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