I'M Breaking Up With You

I thought we had something special, I thought I was the only one

Commenting on all my poems was when it all had begun.


Then I found out one day, that you treat everyone just the same

Praising them for their poems and not just for fame.


I didn't feel betrayed neither did I get mad

As you’re here for every one and that made me glad. 


But I’m sad to say PD, that I'm breaking up with you. 

As I realized everyone here needs you, as much as I do… 





Contest: I'm Breaking Up With You

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 6/22/2014 1:19:00 PM
Congrats on your great win!!!!!
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 6/23/2014 2:43:00 AM
Thank You again :) hehe
Date: 6/20/2014 11:45:00 PM
thank you for the comment on my comment...Linda
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Date: 6/20/2014 5:47:00 PM
LOL, Sasha, a nice clean break-up. Congrats on your win!!! Love ~SKAT~
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 6/23/2014 2:55:00 AM
ahh Thank You so much Skat :)
Date: 6/20/2014 8:39:00 AM
Congrats on the win!!!!!
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 6/20/2014 8:54:00 AM
Thank You :)
Date: 6/19/2014 11:36:00 PM
And back again wid big congrats Sasha !
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 6/20/2014 1:36:00 AM
Thank You :)
Date: 6/19/2014 8:40:00 PM
It is a wonderful thing that she does to get us all excited...congrats Tim
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 6/20/2014 1:36:00 AM
Yes Indeed :). Thank You
Date: 6/19/2014 8:16:00 PM
Sasha, love this endearing breakup. Congrats on your sweet write and win!
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 6/20/2014 1:37:00 AM
Thank You :)
Date: 6/19/2014 5:52:00 PM
aww that was a sweet cool break up. grats on your win :)
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 6/20/2014 1:37:00 AM
Thank You :)
Date: 6/19/2014 12:47:00 PM
Congratz for the win! Nice poem you deserve to win.
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 6/20/2014 1:38:00 AM
Thank You :)
Date: 6/19/2014 9:44:00 AM
Congratulations on the win,very nice poem
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 6/20/2014 1:38:00 AM
Thank You :)
Date: 6/19/2014 9:20:00 AM
Good job on speaking to the subject matter that we all deal with on this site. Well done and congrats on your high placement.
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 6/20/2014 1:39:00 AM
Thank You :)
Date: 6/19/2014 8:35:00 AM
This is so sweet. Congrats.
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 6/20/2014 1:40:00 AM
Thank You :)
Date: 6/19/2014 6:53:00 AM
Congratulations, Sasha on a well-deserved, big win! Warm regards.
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 6/20/2014 1:40:00 AM
Thank You :)
Date: 6/19/2014 6:44:00 AM
Congrats on a great win, Sasha.. Such a sweet break up.. Hugs.. Arlene..
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 6/20/2014 1:41:00 AM
Thank You :)
Date: 6/19/2014 6:35:00 AM
Congratulations on a fine win in Breaking up contest,
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 6/20/2014 1:41:00 AM
Thank You :)
Date: 6/19/2014 12:23:00 AM
PS... This was my favorite from all my number one poems... Glad you are not greedy.... Hugs... Linda
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 6/20/2014 1:43:00 AM
yay :)
Date: 6/19/2014 12:22:00 AM
WOW, I love it Sasha, Sorry, you are not the only one. My heart and pen belong to all. I try and give this place my best, I am sorry to say, I abondon those, who hide, or think, I am not worth it. I move on, after that I'm nothing more than a copy paste memeory...LOL Congratulations, and thank you so much for enjoying, my contest. I enjoyed every poem, on my Breaking up contest. I can sit here, and say I truly enjoyed every entry, even the few that chose not to follow my rules... LOL, Love LINDA
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 6/20/2014 1:42:00 AM
aah PD, my broken heart has just been mended. lol.. Thank You soo much for you kind and inspiring words always... <3
Date: 6/12/2014 2:14:00 PM
It's a great take Sasha ,, gl in contest !
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 6/13/2014 4:16:00 AM
Thank You :)
Date: 6/12/2014 9:50:00 AM
Simply love the take on the contest, shasha
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 6/13/2014 4:16:00 AM
Thank You :)
Date: 6/12/2014 7:03:00 AM
Hi Sasha, this is a gem! I love it! Bravo!
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 6/12/2014 7:10:00 AM
aah Thank You :)
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