I'M Breaking Up With You

I thought we had something special, I thought I was the only one

Commenting on all my poems was when it all had begun.


Then I found out one day, that you treat everyone just the same

Praising them for their poems and not just for fame.


I didn't feel betrayed neither did I get mad

As you’re here for every one and that made me glad. 


But I’m sad to say PD, that I'm breaking up with you. 

As I realized everyone here needs you, as much as I do… 





Contest: I'm Breaking Up With You

Sponsor: Poet Destroyer
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lindley Avatar
June 22, 2014 at 1:19 PM
Congrats on your great win!!!!!
Maharaj Avatar
June 23, 2014 at 2:43 AM
Thank You again :) hehe
A   Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 11:45 PM
thank you for the comment on my comment...Linda
A  Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 5:47 PM
LOL, Sasha, a nice clean break-up. Congrats on your win!!! Love ~SKAT~
Maharaj Avatar
June 23, 2014 at 2:55 AM
ahh Thank You so much Skat :)
Lindley Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 8:39 AM
Congrats on the win!!!!!
Maharaj Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 8:54 AM
Thank You :)
A. Sharma Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 11:36 PM
And back again wid big congrats Sasha !
Maharaj Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 1:36 AM
Thank You :)
Smith Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 8:40 PM
It is a wonderful thing that she does to get us all excited...congrats Tim
Maharaj Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 1:36 AM
Yes Indeed :). Thank You
Macfarlane Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 8:16 PM
Sasha, love this endearing breakup. Congrats on your sweet write and win!
Maharaj Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 1:37 AM
Thank You :)
Nance Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 5:52 PM
aww that was a sweet cool break up. grats on your win :)
Maharaj Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 1:37 AM
Thank You :)
Jamoner Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 12:47 PM
Congratz for the win! Nice poem you deserve to win.
Maharaj Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 1:38 AM
Thank You :)
Hoffman Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 9:44 AM
Congratulations on the win,very nice poem
Maharaj Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 1:38 AM
Thank You :)
Johnson Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 9:20 AM
Good job on speaking to the subject matter that we all deal with on this site. Well done and congrats on your high placement.
Maharaj Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 1:39 AM
Thank You :)
Lamoureux Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 8:35 AM
This is so sweet. Congrats.
Maharaj Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 1:40 AM
Thank You :)
Sietesantos Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 6:53 AM
Congratulations, Sasha on a well-deserved, big win! Warm regards.
Maharaj Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 1:40 AM
Thank You :)
Smith Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 6:44 AM
Congrats on a great win, Sasha.. Such a sweet break up.. Hugs.. Arlene..
Maharaj Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 1:41 AM
Thank You :)
Mehta Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 6:35 AM
Congratulations on a fine win in Breaking up contest,
Maharaj Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 1:41 AM
Thank You :)
A   Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 12:23 AM
PS... This was my favorite from all my number one poems... Glad you are not greedy.... Hugs... Linda
Maharaj Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 1:43 AM
yay :)
A   Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 12:22 AM
WOW, I love it Sasha, Sorry, you are not the only one. My heart and pen belong to all. I try and give this place my best, I am sorry to say, I abondon those, who hide, or think, I am not worth it. I move on, after that I'm nothing more than a copy paste memeory...LOL Congratulations, and thank you so much for enjoying, my contest. I enjoyed every poem, on my Breaking up contest. I can sit here, and say I truly enjoyed every entry, even the few that chose not to follow my rules... LOL, Love LINDA
Maharaj Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 1:42 AM
aah PD, my broken heart has just been mended. lol.. Thank You soo much for you kind and inspiring words always... <3
A. Sharma Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 2:14 PM
It's a great take Sasha ,, gl in contest !
Maharaj Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 4:16 AM
Thank You :)
Mehta Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 9:50 AM
Simply love the take on the contest, shasha
Maharaj Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 4:16 AM
Thank You :)
Sietesantos Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 7:03 AM
Hi Sasha, this is a gem! I love it! Bravo!
Maharaj Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 7:10 AM
aah Thank You :)
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