I'M All Right Jack:

I'm all right Jack:
   as the wretched live in shacks,
   in the slums out the back,
   by the place with Big Mac’s, 
   of the price that they lack.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Rodrigues Avatar
June 20, 2019 at 7:23 AM
Impeccable imagery! Thought provoking
Key Avatar
February 21, 2010 at 10:04 PM
Very good rhyme. Thanks for the comment on I Want to Live In A Castle. I have this facination with England. Josette
Hill Avatar
January 25, 2010 at 7:45 PM
Nice one David, I love the way so few lines can paint such a huge description, look forward to reading more of your work!
Peranteau Avatar
January 16, 2010 at 8:22 AM
Another perfect, depictive write Sir !!!! james
Strand Avatar
January 14, 2010 at 11:53 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest David.Rgds Brian
Dietrich Avatar
January 14, 2010 at 5:04 PM
And to you I also say, "charming" hahaha. Luv, andrea
Owens Avatar
January 14, 2010 at 4:45 PM
Very nice write...so true...Marty
Kendrick Avatar
January 14, 2010 at 3:39 PM
Great write here in this one. Very descriptive of the situation of many in America today. If an entry in the contest good luck. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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