Im All Out

I'M ALL OUT OF DREAMS
OBEDIENCE TAKES OVER
YOU ARE THE GENERAL
I AM THE SOLDIER

I'M ALL OUT OF PATIENCE 
I LOOK THROUGHT THE WINDOW
YOU SET THE BAR DOWN 
I'M STUCK IN THIS LIMBO

I'M ALL OUT OF STRENGTH
I'M WEAK AND I'M QUESY
YOU PUSH ON MY CHEST 
GRIP TIGHT CAUSE YOUR SQUEEZING

I'M ALL OUT OF TIME
BUT THE CLOCK KEEPS ON TICKING
I'M LOST BUT NOT FOUND
SINCE OF DIRECTION NOT WITH ME

I'M ALL OUT OF MIND
NO LOGIC OR REASON
YOU TOOK MY COMPASSION 
I'M COLD HEARTED AND FREEZIN

I'M ALL OUT OF WORDS
TO WRITE ON THIS PAPER
I'M ALL OUT OF THOUGTHS 
AND YOU WERE THE TAKER

Written 1-22-19

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/21/2019 1:01:00 AM

Troy, I think you can do better. It sounds like she has had a lot of power over you but luckily maybe that is over? A nice heartfelt write, my friend.