I'M a Psycho

Let’s face facts you’re a motherloving no one
couldn’t find a flow if you were looking at the ocean 
I’ll stand and deliver like I’m living in a river
Your thoughts are all flops 
like the tap drips drops

just a monkey in a mosh pit flinging your bits 
or a donkey with a dogs lick running your lip

How could it be these simple silly fools
wanna come at me with single syllables
thinking that their write is even close to credible 

you’re looking at a mind already been defeated 
beaten battered shattered left in bits scattered untreated
I ain’t talking your urban street knifes bullets pieces
I’m talking bout science religion clueless scared preachers 

you think I cannot write a stanza 
two hands of the Abu Hamza
only good for the hook 
you mistook I'm a bomb bomb bonanza 

step inside my mind you’ll find a jungle in decline 
just a rhyme fortress faultless flinging out these fine rhymes
admittedly I need to grow my own ability 
to leave the ground just like a tree 
rise up to where the breeze freeze

and loyalty, treat 'em like their above with love like Royalty 
oh wait it's just me, I guess that's how it be 

I don't lose 
when I'm removed
I learn to use
come back improved
settle scores and raise the roof 

and if I want to "Trim Trimedy Trimmer" like a doof
I will do, I don't see rhyme or rhythm come from you
do this with ease, OCD disease 
I want attention? Please, I'd rather herpeas

and no one's fully listening but still I'm funking rhythming 
won't be dried up drained like my addiction to Ritalin
do you think I want "fitting in" I'm unfitted Trim
think free not addicts to image and gyms

I'm the devil level of upheaval
I come and I'm lethal
illegal drug piercing needle
for the people

I pick up the pace 
to see the face look amazed
I can kick it with race
black Asian outta space
this skill was untraced
now to put it in its place
mumble rap sucks
flush it with the waste
I'm Peter Pan with Jedi traits 
Peter Jedi basket case 

aspire higher than you thought I might
up to heights blind to naked eyes
show you all how to be ambitious 
sod sky limits I'm satellite dishes

and my dreams seen as insanity
up above the gravity 
out of reach you laugh and see
lost the plot turn backs on me

but if you can dream it be it
then you better believe it
you can breed it breathe in
be everything you're needing

I may seem corny to corneas
but coroners could cover you tomorrow
caught up in common compliance 
then life freedom isn't and can't borrow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 11/13/2019 5:01:00 PM
A little lengthy but still enjoyable with many thought provoking lines that were relatable and ticked my boxes.
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Date: 9/11/2019 6:56:00 AM
It works Nick
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Date: 9/12/2019 5:55:00 AM
lol thanks
Date: 8/31/2019 7:53:00 AM
when the original is explicit as is this, and you write it clean as you see here, it doesn't always work lol
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