Nette Onclaud Poet Haiku

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JCB Brul's Illusku: Illustrated Haiku 4 Contest ...pardon my being a novice at computer graphics :)

Illusku 4 spring debut

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amber this landscape.       * 
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dawn's glow lilting on fresh dew---
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                     April's spring debut 
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Paula Goldsmith April 28, 2026 at 9:26 AM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative write with fun shapes. Have a great day writing away with your win..................

Paige Hind April 12, 2026 at 10:08 PM sweet!!!

Andrea Dietrich April 11, 2026 at 3:48 PM Nicely done, Nette. I like that you rhymed dew and debut. When I am at my computer, I want to see if yours stayed looking the same as it does here by my phone

Troy Greece April 11, 2026 at 7:06 AM Visuals and haiku all good.