Joanna Daniel Poet Other

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success sounds sweeter        



a birdling flutters
its newfound wings with some qualms ~
success sounds sweeter         

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Sara Kendrick November 5, 2025 at 3:38 AM Congratulations on your winner, way to go. Delightful work you have written and designed. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich November 4, 2025 at 3:45 PM Sweet one. Congrats on the win

Anne-Lise Andresen November 4, 2025 at 10:23 AM - Congratulations on your win in the contest, Joanna ... lovely written :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith November 4, 2025 at 9:16 AM Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative write again. Love your fun bird shape. Have a wonderful day writing away with your win..............

Dr. Vandana Sharma October 16, 2025 at 12:02 AM Wow! I can see it fly!! All the best for the contest.

Andrea Dietrich October 15, 2025 at 3:49 PM You did great with this one. So nice to see one of your poems again

Paula Goldsmith October 15, 2025 at 3:17 PM What a creative/fun ~ write/shape you have here. Love It... "Good Luck" We both did this one. You made it look soooooo easy. I had problems with my apple shape. Have a fun day writing away...............