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10/14/2025 for Illusku: Illustrated Haiku Challenge 2 Poetry Contest sponsored by JCB Brul

Illusku

                a leaf catches rain
holding  no   more,    water  slips  
              puddle made from d
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Sara Kendrick November 6, 2025 at 3:16 AM Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K David Crandall November 6, 2025 at 8:10 PM Thanks, Sara!

Terry Miller November 5, 2025 at 2:09 AM Very, very clever, congratulations David Crandall November 5, 2025 at 9:18 AM Thanks, Terry!

Andrea Dietrich November 4, 2025 at 3:55 PM Congrats on the win, David David Crandall November 5, 2025 at 9:17 AM Thanks, Andrea!

Anne-Lise Andresen November 4, 2025 at 10:13 AM - Congratulations on your win in the contest, David - Fun one :) - hugs David Crandall November 5, 2025 at 9:18 AM Thanks, Anne-Lise! David Crandall November 5, 2025 at 9:17 AM Thanks, Anne-Lise!

Paula Goldsmith November 4, 2025 at 10:08 AM Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun write/shape again. Have a wonderful day writing away with your win.............. David Crandall November 5, 2025 at 9:17 AM Thanks, Paula!

Dr. Vandana Sharma October 16, 2025 at 12:06 AM Drip, trip, trip! All the best for the contest. David Crandall October 16, 2025 at 11:29 AM Thanks, Vandana!

Paula Goldsmith October 14, 2025 at 1:24 PM This made me laugh. What a fun write/shape you have here. "Good Luck" We both did this one. I had problems with my shape. It was the first time I did a shape like this.  Have a fun day writing away............... David Crandall October 14, 2025 at 6:44 PM Thanks, Paula!