William Kelii Kekaula Poet Other

Notes About The Poem

Poetic Forms: Haiku/Shape

Illusku: Illustrated Haiku Challenge 2

Sponsor: JCB Burl

Entry Submitted: 2025 October 09

Contest Judged: 2025 November 04

Contest Placement: 2nd Place

illusku

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                                                                                                               i             t             e                    *
                                                                      i   n          s,   h                                                               d      
        r    a             i    l                              w              g               e
f                  g                 e



               f  r  o  m         i  n  k         b  l  o  t  s         o  n         w  h  i  t  e         c  a  n  v  a  s





                                       h                                                                t
                                           a                                                       n
                                               p                                              e
                                                  p                                     d
                                                       y           a   c   c  i

                                                                                                            fragile wings heightened                                                                               
                                                                                                       from inkblots on white canvas
                                                                                                                   happy accident

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Sara Kendrick November 6, 2025 at 3:17 AM Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich November 4, 2025 at 3:57 PM Very cool message. Congrats on your win William Kelii Kekaula November 5, 2025 at 6:45 AM Thank you, Aloha, William.

Paula Goldsmith November 4, 2025 at 10:13 AM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative/fun write. Love your fun shape. Have a wonderful day writing away with your win.............. William Kelii Kekaula November 5, 2025 at 6:39 AM Thank you, Aloha, William.

Anne-Lise Andresen November 4, 2025 at 10:12 AM - Congratulations on your win in the contest, Hilo :) - hugs William Kelii Kekaula November 5, 2025 at 6:31 AM Thank you, Aloha, William.