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Illusive Rituals

Endless tunnels lead me, to dim corners of strange dimensions Floating with waves to infinity, loops curling me to shores I lose the stories seen, in witty rituals of my mind. May 23, 2020 Let the Pens Flow - Sijo Poetry Contest Sponsor: Jenish Somadas ~Winner: First Place BRIAN'S select D,any form,any theme Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand ~Winner: Third Place

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2020 6:33:00 PM

wow, a number one. Super congrats, Aditi!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/13/2020 7:45:00 PM

Thank you for your kind wishes Andrea :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/12/2020 8:32:00 AM

Congratulations, Aditi! The travels of the mind...witty inside.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/12/2020 8:32:00 AM

Thank you for hour gracious wishes Kim. Much love :)

Jan Allison

Date: 6/12/2020 4:52:00 AM

i can certainly relate to the witty rituals in my mind!:-) many congrats on your win Aditi:-) hugs Jan xx

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/12/2020 7:21:00 AM

Oh that's really great to know. I am sure your mind is beautifully creative Jan. Thank you for your kind wishes! Much love and blessings :)

V. Deepa

Date: 6/12/2020 4:11:00 AM

Hello aditi mam, Congrats for your top win. Like always You did your best:-).Keep writing. And certain times I experience the same as you have conveyed in your poem.Endless tunnels lead me.... Take care.Much love~Deepa:-)

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/12/2020 7:20:00 AM

Thank you so much for your constant encouragement and appreciation Deepa. Glad you could relate with the experience. God bless you. Much love :)

John Watt

Date: 6/11/2020 11:50:00 PM

This swerves and curves and floats in a most intriguing way, Aditi. There is the magic of unpredictability. My fond congratulations for your #1 win poet friend! Blessings ~ John

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/12/2020 12:29:00 AM

Thank you for always stopping by to bless me with your kind words and wishes! Blessings to you. Keep writing and inspiring dear friend :)

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 6/11/2020 4:22:00 PM

Congrats on your win! Such a wonderful write! Very unique in style and character! Well done!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/11/2020 4:33:00 PM

Thank yuu your your kind wishes and appreciation Krish. Blessings :)

Jenish Somadas

Date: 6/11/2020 2:23:00 PM

Great write Aditi.. Congrats on your win..

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/11/2020 3:31:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind wishes and for my placement in your contest :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/24/2020 4:53:00 AM

I feel like I have fallen into a poet's mind, as I have.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/24/2020 5:39:00 AM

I am glad my words could create that effect. Thank you for your appreciation Caren :)

John Watt

Date: 5/23/2020 11:17:00 PM

This feels like what happens in my mind when I'm trying to fall asleep but can't. I loved "in witty rituals of my mind." Great writing, I have never tried this style. Thanks for the inspiration!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/24/2020 5:39:00 AM

Thank you for appreciating my efforts. I experience this often and since you feel the same, I think you should try this. I am sure you will come up with something great John :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/23/2020 8:03:00 PM

I really like this, especially the part about loops curling me to shores! Good luck in the contest.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/23/2020 9:00:00 PM

Glad you loved it. Thank you for your wishes and appreciation :)