Aditi Mishra Poet Sijo

Illusive Rituals

Endless tunnels lead me, to dim corners of strange dimensions
Floating with waves to infinity, loops curling me to shores
I lose the stories seen, in witty rituals of my mind.

May 23, 2020

Let the Pens Flow - Sijo Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Jenish Somadas
~Winner: First Place

BRIAN'S select D,any form,any theme Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Brian Strand
~Winner: Third Place

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Andrea Dietrich June 13, 2020 at 6:33 PM wow, a number one. Super congrats, Aditi! Aditi Mishra June 13, 2020 at 7:45 PM Thank you for your kind wishes Andrea :)

Kim Rodrigues June 12, 2020 at 8:32 AM Congratulations, Aditi! The travels of the mind...witty inside. Aditi Mishra June 12, 2020 at 8:32 AM Thank you for hour gracious wishes Kim. Much love :)

Jan Allison June 12, 2020 at 4:52 AM i can certainly relate to the witty rituals in my mind!:-) many congrats on your win Aditi:-) hugs Jan xx Aditi Mishra June 12, 2020 at 7:21 AM Oh that's really great to know. I am sure your mind is beautifully creative Jan. Thank you for your kind wishes! Much love and blessings :)

V. Deepa June 12, 2020 at 4:11 AM Hello aditi mam, Congrats for your top win. Like always You did your best:-).Keep writing. And certain times I experience the same as you have conveyed in your poem.Endless tunnels lead me.... Take care.Much love~Deepa:-) Aditi Mishra June 12, 2020 at 7:20 AM Thank you so much for your constant encouragement and appreciation Deepa. Glad you could relate with the experience. God bless you. Much love :)

John Watt June 11, 2020 at 11:50 PM This swerves and curves and floats in a most intriguing way, Aditi. There is the magic of unpredictability. My fond congratulations for your #1 win poet friend! Blessings ~ John Aditi Mishra June 12, 2020 at 12:29 AM Thank you for always stopping by to bless me with your kind words and wishes! Blessings to you. Keep writing and inspiring dear friend :)

Krish Radhakrishna June 11, 2020 at 4:22 PM Congrats on your win! Such a wonderful write! Very unique in style and character! Well done! Aditi Mishra June 11, 2020 at 4:33 PM Thank yuu your your kind wishes and appreciation Krish. Blessings :)

Jenish Somadas June 11, 2020 at 2:23 PM Great write Aditi.. Congrats on your win.. Aditi Mishra June 11, 2020 at 3:31 PM Thank you so much for your kind wishes and for my placement in your contest :)

Caren Krutsinger May 24, 2020 at 4:53 AM I feel like I have fallen into a poet's mind, as I have. Aditi Mishra May 24, 2020 at 5:39 AM I am glad my words could create that effect. Thank you for your appreciation Caren :)

John Watt May 23, 2020 at 11:17 PM This feels like what happens in my mind when I'm trying to fall asleep but can't. I loved "in witty rituals of my mind." Great writing, I have never tried this style. Thanks for the inspiration! Aditi Mishra May 24, 2020 at 5:39 AM Thank you for appreciating my efforts. I experience this often and since you feel the same, I think you should try this. I am sure you will come up with something great John :)

Andrea Dietrich May 23, 2020 at 8:03 PM I really like this, especially the part about loops curling me to shores! Good luck in the contest. Aditi Mishra May 23, 2020 at 9:00 PM Glad you loved it. Thank you for your wishes and appreciation :)

David Mohn May 23, 2020 at 5:48 PM quite a nuanced labyrinth you have created here Aditi...wonderful :) Aditi Mishra May 23, 2020 at 7:35 PM Thank you for your kind words of appreciation David :)

Connie Marcum Wong May 23, 2020 at 4:53 PM This is a very lovely Silo Aditi. I could see this clearly with my minds eye. Blessings xxoo Aditi Mishra May 23, 2020 at 7:35 PM I am glad you love it Connie. Thanks so much for your kind words of appreciation :)