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Illusions

Mystical horizons Illusions to see Flickering fantasy Time flowing free Rest your pretty head But don’t close your eyes Dreams go away But never say goodbye Life is a treasure But only for some Stop digging now You’ll only succumb Lingering freedom Looming overhead Glowing darkness Takes over instead Wishes are snowflakes Floating in space Protection fails At a leisurely pace Deception tickles Whispered in your ear Beginning is never End is near

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/11/2010 12:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Jodie. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/30/2010 8:27:00 AM
What wonderful rhythm and rhyme congrates on being featured this week brava love Jayne
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Date: 8/30/2010 6:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week here at PoetrySoup Jodie. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/29/2010 2:24:00 PM
Congrats Jodie on your featured poem this week on the Soup... a nice one to share with us all.. with luv..
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Date: 6/8/2010 12:54:00 PM
addicting - the more i read, the more i want to read it more, etc. very enjoyable, thank you, chuck
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Date: 6/8/2010 6:07:00 AM
a beautiful, sometimes dreamy poem.. rgds WN
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Date: 6/7/2010 6:11:00 PM
pretty poem, enjoyed reading today!
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Date: 6/7/2010 4:56:00 PM
IT SOUNDS DREAMY LOL, LOVED IT -IRMA
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Date: 6/7/2010 3:59:00 PM
well written, enjoyed.. p.d.
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Date: 6/7/2010 3:53:00 PM
well written, enjoyed.. p.d.
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Date: 6/7/2010 3:46:00 PM
Really like this one it has flow and an allluring that drew me in and held my attention...Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara
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