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Illusion Of Solidity

Written: August 9, 2026, for a contest sponsored by Unseeking Seeker. ****************** Line of inquiry: The dream seems real since we don a form, borrowed from elements of that domain, but if we simply chose not to conform, we wake up when desires to rest are lain. ****************** We are the shimmer; darkness cannot reclaim. Flickers of fire on fathomless ocean's frame. A silver silhouette against the scythe stone, A borrowed brightness feigning as our own. The moon quiets the lake, then lets it speak. Standing reflected, a promise we never meek We name the glimmer, whisper "this is real", Holographic worlds—slide beyond a thick veil. Body is dust that divaricates dawn-lent flame, Seeing self as secrets with flesh called by name. We gather our shades—shield what won't stay, While stark certainties leach their hue to gray, What seems solid is but a palimpsest stream, Matter made radiant by an evanescent dream. The mountain, the moth, the marrow, the star Are one vibration haunting forms afar. And when the last light slips from the land, When time lets all faint-shaped figures disband, Nothing is lost in the vastness we fear— The wave folds back to the ocean ever near. Perhaps existence isn't alabaster grace, Still, its elfin alchemy we chase and trace. A thousand lives tangled in an eolithic breath, One archetype shifting shape beyond death. You came—not as an Olympus-evoked ghost. Nor as a celestial fire from genesis frost. But silent silence invaded my Elysium pen. As ink flared fact fibers, fathoming zen.
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Kauffman Avatar
August 21, 2026 at 11:13 AM
Dearest Lasaad, there is no illusion about the eloquence of your words, your understanding of the illusions found in our dreams and the world we return to every morning where we, as pilgrims on a life journey, continue to walk - the forms we can hold like your "Elysium pen" that express your profound understanding of life. Congratulations on your win, dear friend. Blessings for your journey.
Guptar Avatar
August 21, 2026 at 8:05 AM
Congratulations dear poet on your win in this contest with as usual a gem sparkling with layers of imagery, an exceptional diction, profundity of thought, a fuid rhythm and choosy rhymes, with all elements of beauty in poetry. Particularly appreciated the penultimate stanza. Wishing you a blessed day.
MITRA Avatar
August 20, 2026 at 7:28 AM
Esteemed Sir Poet, congratulations on being a contest winner—most richly deserved. Had I been the judge, I would have placed this poem at the very summit; yet, beyond every contest’s hierarchy, it has secured a still higher place—in my heart. You make solidity quietly unmask itself, until mountain, moth, marrow and star become transient utterances of one vast vibration. Your imagery is not ornament but evidence. I am humbly grateful to have read it. ✨
Kendrick Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 7:11 AM
This one reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Creative work. 👍👍 Sara K.
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