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Illumination

In the brightest hour Of my darkest day I will realise what is wrong with me Then I will be found and rememberd Salvation will be my name There will be nothing left to fear What was dark will be illuminated The spotlight will never fade Destruction will lead to creation And life of better days Sharp, bitter, piercing winds Will break down barriers Anger will be demolished The passion and fire im my soul Is what will keep me alive My pain and anguish will be forgotton I will live my life Iwill be okay.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/24/2012 1:21:00 PM
Beautiful! Check out my poem Ribcage featured this week. Have a wonderful day and congrats and keep up the awesome work of epicness!!! -----DWB
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Date: 5/24/2012 7:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Stacey. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/9/2012 6:43:00 AM
First thing first - welcome to poetry soup, you'll fine everyone here is relly quite friendly,and if you take the tiem to read and comment on other peopls poems, mostly they'll do the same for you :) This is a really good poem I love the story you are telling, needs a little bit of polish. Verse 2 Line 5, if should be of I think. V3 L1 piercing. V4 L1 in not im. V5 L2 I will. I've always though better to know what's wrong this time so next time can be better, I really enjoyed your poem.
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Stacey Brackley
Date: 4/3/2012 12:49:00 PM
Thank you, I appreciate the time you have taken.

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