Illuminated Path

Through the thicket lies
A very long beaten path;
Lit by midday sun
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Spence Sr Avatar
June 28, 2009 at 3:42 PM
Hello Adell, I am so sorry to hear about your medical situation. I am praying for your recovery. God bless always! Joseph
Tugaff Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 9:14 AM
Hello Adell, few words with a huge wisdom to glean. Very interesting poem. Ernilando
Higgins Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 6:18 AM
Wonderful Haiku.. the sun leading the way..well done.
White Avatar
March 29, 2009 at 6:08 PM
the sun so powerful and yet so useful, hi Adell, I hope that this will find you well, take care D-nyce
Winter Avatar
March 18, 2009 at 5:04 AM
Lovely visual and so much more you can take from this. Excelllent. Love, Shar
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March 17, 2009 at 4:00 PM
Nice use of imagery. The title works well with the poem. Much to think about here. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Karen
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