Notes About The Poem

- Illogical -

Capture the moments that will never come back

                         two squirrels play in the walnut tree 

                   Do they use a sledgehammer to crack a nut?











26.10.22
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Gregory Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 5:45 PM
Teeming in so many such moment it's the rare gift which transmit it's imagery, you achieve it well It's breathtaking,
Andresen Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 2:21 AM
- Thank you for your comment, Gregory :) - hugs
Watt Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 10:39 AM
That's a hard nut to crack. Smart animals find a way. I once witnessed an otter floating on its back cracking open an oyster on its chest with a rock. Nice write and love your new avatar. Hugs ~ John
Andresen Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 11:01 AM
- ...with a rock ... sounds painful ... - thank you very much, John ... a pleasant surprise to see you on my poems :) - hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 1:53 AM
One is always curious to learn the ways of nature. I guess squirrels have tough teeth. Loved your poem. Hugs.
Andresen Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 10:57 AM
- They should have eaten something softer ... such as jelly raspberries :))) - hugs
Trifiatis Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 3:28 PM
Nature and its Creator have foreseen the difficulty and have provided the right tool to do the Job. A profound, witty, and poetic writing, dearest, Anne-Lise. It made me smile! Be blessed!
Andresen Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 10:54 AM
- Nuts are not easy to crack ... many thanks for your words ... glad it gave you a smile :) - hugs
Cunningham Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 12:39 PM
Thought provoking verse Anne, Love the picture. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
Andresen Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 1:21 PM
- Everything is fine with me, Tom ... many thanks ... hope the same for you :) - hugs
Roper Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 12:09 PM
cute verse... she is a mama. beautiful avatar :)
Andresen Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 12:12 PM
- A cute mama :) - thanks & hugs
Pandit Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 12:03 PM
What a splendid moment you captured, Anne-Lise. Loved your photo and your poem.
Andresen Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 12:11 PM
- Make me happy ... many thanks my faithful friend, Vijay :) - hugs
Poet Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 11:45 AM
You wrote a profound and meaningful poem, Anne-Lise. It's loaded with phallic symbols, mainly in the word sledgehammer:). Great metaphors
Andresen Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 12:01 PM
- Strange how powerful certain words can be ... - Thank you for your comment, Las :) - hugs
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