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Illiterate

Illiterate is the rain Rolling down the windowpane But it can write your name

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/22/2013 1:49:00 AM
Wow, what a haiku this is! It's a bit on the clever side, but such an intimate piece of writing... congrats on your first place win! It's easy to see why it won...
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Date: 5/21/2013 4:48:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Rick
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Date: 5/21/2013 1:30:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win Betim, well done xx
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Date: 5/20/2013 8:51:00 PM
A very nice in the mood poem, Betim :-) Congratulations in Carrie's contest. xox~ Linda Linda
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Date: 5/20/2013 2:44:00 PM
Awesome .. Extremely well done :)
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Date: 5/20/2013 2:33:00 PM
this is very imaginative!! Big congrats.
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Date: 5/20/2013 12:50:00 PM
Very clever...congratulations..
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Date: 5/20/2013 10:54:00 AM
Congrats on your fine win. AO
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Date: 5/20/2013 10:34:00 AM
A win well deserved. Visible and effective Haiku. Congratulations. Connie
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Date: 5/20/2013 8:59:00 AM
Beautiful ....love this!
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Date: 2/2/2011 5:27:00 PM
love writting on the windows spelling backwards, enjoyed your haiku Betim,..p.d.
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Date: 2/2/2011 3:44:00 PM
Very nice haiku with good images on illiterate
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