Illiterate

Illiterate is the rain
Rolling down the windowpane
But it can write your name
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Hicks Avatar
May 22, 2013 at 1:49 AM
Wow, what a haiku this is! It's a bit on the clever side, but such an intimate piece of writing... congrats on your first place win! It's easy to see why it won...
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
May 21, 2013 at 1:30 AM
Many congratulations on your win Betim, well done xx
A   Avatar
May 20, 2013 at 8:51 PM
A very nice in the mood poem, Betim :-) Congratulations in Carrie's contest. xox~ Linda Linda
Sindhu Avatar
May 20, 2013 at 2:44 PM
Awesome .. Extremely well done :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 20, 2013 at 2:33 PM
this is very imaginative!! Big congrats.
Jones Avatar
May 20, 2013 at 12:50 PM
Very clever...congratulations..
Oyewole Avatar
May 20, 2013 at 10:54 AM
Congrats on your fine win. AO
Gildersleeve Avatar
May 20, 2013 at 10:34 AM
A win well deserved. Visible and effective Haiku. Congratulations. Connie
Richards Avatar
May 20, 2013 at 8:59 AM
Beautiful ....love this!
A   Avatar
February 2, 2011 at 5:27 PM
love writting on the windows spelling backwards, enjoyed your haiku Betim,..p.d.
Mehta Avatar
February 2, 2011 at 3:44 PM
Very nice haiku with good images on illiterate
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace