Chantelle Serrano Poet I do not know?

Ill-Fated Juliet

Shattered glass, piercing heart.
The unborn clock advances to despair.
A hundred shards cast Romeo into view. 
Disgusted and dispatched for heavy hearts encounter. 
Her forsaken sentiments forever Present.

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Darren White June 22, 2017 at 1:31 AM Oh, I love it even more now :) It looks great this way.

Darren White June 20, 2017 at 12:36 AM This is Free Verse. And I LOVE it. It is beautifully written. It would be even stronger (just my personal opinion), if you would shape it into short lines. Welcome to PoetrySoup :) Chantelle Serrano June 21, 2017 at 8:46 PM Thank you and thank you for the advice and help. Just starting to write I need all the that I need.:)