I'Ll Take the Sheep

I heard a relaxation tape
That’s meant to help you sleep,
Its soothing tones enticing you
To slumber, sans the sheep.

A female voice suggested
That you focus on your day,
Especially on upbeat things
Encountered on your way.

Think back on all the foods you ate,
The veggies and the fruit,
Reflecting on where they were grown
And where they went en route.

Next concentrate on someone who
Brings joy and makes you smile
And hopefully your eyes will close
Or start to, in a while.

The disembodied voice droned on,
Releasing to the void
Suggestions which may work for some,
But just made me annoyed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Allison Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 8:24 AM
Ilene, the final stanza made me lol - stick to counting sheep in future:-) hugs jan xx
Krutsinger Avatar
April 24, 2023 at 10:31 AM
"The disembodied voice droned on, Releasing to the void" - I use something called "flash news briefing" every night which lulls me to sleep almost immediately, so I can relate to this.
Rigoler Avatar
April 22, 2023 at 1:57 PM
I don't have a problem falling to sleep. I'm out as soon as my head sinks in the pillow. What a blessing that is! So many of my friends of my age complain about sleep deficiency. I'd say my brain is designed for sleep efficiency! / Maurice
Draper Avatar
April 16, 2023 at 6:10 PM
Really enjoyed this one! Thanks for making me laugh :)
Wolf Avatar
April 15, 2023 at 8:36 PM
I guess you 'lamb-asted' this relaxation tape, eh?! lol. Good one, ilene. ~ Confirmed Insomniac
Turner Avatar
April 15, 2023 at 8:01 PM
LOL. I think music works best or just reading. Thanks for the laugh, Ilene:)
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