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i'll still punch uh brutha out

. i felt hern pretty hips lips twist i felt hern pretty melt shiver i felt hern pretty warm az slid 'part ourn flesh did i felt hern breathe az pretty she sleep'd

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Joe Maverick

Date: 5/5/2025 9:44:00 PM

Now to those gender deniers this would seem A nightmare scene..While to the better functioning, t'would appear? as you write of a dream! All blessings James.)

James Peranteau
Date: 5/7/2025 9:51:00 AM

it's the old coin; not to mistake mine love-struck for thuh fragile pneuma ;)...p.s... 'tweren't thuh dream dear poet ')