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i'll still punch uh brutha out

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                       i felt hern pretty
                                hips
                                lips
                               twist

                       i felt hern pretty
                               melt
                              shiver

                       i felt hern pretty
                              warm
                          az slid 'part
                           ourn flesh
                                 did

                      i felt hern breathe
                                  az
                           pretty she 
                              sleep'd
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Maverick Avatar
May 5, 2025 at 9:44 PM
Now to those gender deniers this would seem A nightmare scene..While to the better functioning, t'would appear? as you write of a dream! All blessings James.)
Peranteau Avatar
May 7, 2025 at 9:51 AM
it's the old coin; not to mistake mine love-struck for thuh fragile pneuma ;)...p.s... 'tweren't thuh dream dear poet ')
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