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I'Ll Settle

I want to own my home But the mortgage is too high I want that great job But there's no applications to apply I want that new fancy car But the payments just can't be done So I'll settle for my wonderful husband And my three terrific sons

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Skat A

Date: 3/21/2010 12:53:00 PM

Enjoyed the read I like the family value..A family is more valuable than anything...

Date: 3/18/2010 4:32:00 PM

And in that family you have treasure money can't buy. I'm glad to hear you cherish it like I do my own family. We live simply as did my parents. Wonderful message in this poem. Thank you for sharing it and for your kind comments. Keep on writing from the heart! Karen

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/16/2010 9:20:00 AM

Appreciate what you have not what you wish you had! Very nice Faleshia - it says a lot. Thanks for your thoughts on my limericks. Have a happy - Ralph

Amy Green

Date: 3/16/2010 8:32:00 AM

I am right there with you, Sweetie! Unfortunately, this is all too true for too many people these days... the part about being jobless. I really enjoyed the way you turned it around and made the situation positive...more than positive, this is full of inspiration. Also, in our "Oh-so-busy-lives" we tend to get caught up in the rat race and forget what really matters. Loved the write.

Bathsheba Bathsheba

Date: 3/16/2010 8:21:00 AM

Sounds good enough to me lol - Thanks for a fab share Faleshia -:)