Rebecca Pasco Poet I do not know?

I'Ll Be Guilty

I know not much detail,this place of which i desire.To sin so sweetly,shall i find one to 
conspire? Hand in hand setting plan to visit the land of ecstasy.To take from it a pinch of 
pleasure to share between him and me.Reaching a climax that has the world itself stopping 
to witness our moment in time.The moon admiring such a resplendent crime.These such 
memories shall be eternal,recorded in the depths of my hearts journal.For there 
i...somewhere in the pages thereof.Preserved a place to write into memory the first time of 
which he and I make love.

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Jay Loveless December 15, 2009 at 10:59 AM beautiful i love this truly <33 xoxox Rainbow

Debbie Guzzi September 21, 2009 at 4:22 PM very nice..a good work..the format detracts from it. I believe it does rhyme and could better be appreciated in grouped lines. I know not much detail,this place of desire. To sin so sweetly,shall i find one to conspire? couplets? Light & Love

Ashley Yates July 5, 2009 at 8:51 PM Amazing! So passionate, you had my heart racing! Great write!

Shahana Jackson July 5, 2009 at 8:29 PM Oh my god I loved this.... " these such memories shall be eternal, recorded in the depths of my hearts journal" I love this line. Your lucky to have such good memories of this.... It beautiful

Sajdah Al-Riyami June 21, 2009 at 2:34 AM My Hearts Journal?Making Love in Heaven?The Sin So Sweet?--Thats all i've got:p

Cesar Cantu June 20, 2009 at 8:41 PM Oh this is a nice poem to conmemorate a memorable moment; a title? well, that's up to you jojojo I though about the word Eros for a moment, yet this goes beyond that; I always though that a relationship in love is a way of art, and making love is like canvassing such art =D thanks for sharing yei!!!