I'Ll Be Doomed

I’ll be doomed


I’ll be doomed for just watching you move
Along frail lines of lost unreal hope –

I’ll be doomed -
And unable to prove
Good intentions, so quickly evolved.

I’ll be doomed for just making you smile –
The sweet secret I bring rose from hell.

I’ll be doomed, but my friend, don’t you cry –
Until then I’ll make sure
All is well…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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February 11, 2009 at 11:06 AM
Wow... It makes me think of... so many things that can relate to my own life... I'm a big fan of your poetry...
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