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I'Ll Be Alright

I’ll be alright Gashes on my forehead Sweeping my hair to cover it up Sister seen it with fear I held her and said I’ll be alright Blows to the chest Drowning me in my bed Hold my 3mth old next to me Whispering I’ll be alright Fist fights Late night scares Getting beat to the ground Holding my bottle of liquor Slurring I’ll be alright Dragging my face on the ground Spitting disgustingly at my feet Missing jewelry But always have a smile on my face Tearing I’ll be alright 2 years free of physical abuse Fracture sternum Torn/rupture disc Slight loss of memory Still in pain But I hope I’ll be alright Expressing my pain Loving my life Still hurts to explain But damn it Im alright

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/26/2013 4:09:00 AM

Danyelle, a enjoyable poem to read. - Welcome to P-Soup-Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Have fun with poetry! - Welcome to read some of my poems. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 5/25/2013 11:28:00 AM

Hi Danyelle, your poem is very enjoyable :-) A nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~SKAT~

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 5/20/2013 9:16:00 AM

Excellent piece expressed here..very powerful!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/19/2013 3:30:00 PM

Danyelle, Welcome to poetry soup. My name is Linda; If you like, please consider checking out my newest contest for fun : -) You can find the contest page by clicking on the top left hand side. You will find many different contests to choose from. I’m looking forward in reading and following your poems as of now and the future. If you ever want or need feedback on certain poems, please look me up. I can't wait to read what you highly recommend. You can always stop by and say hi if you like. Keep me posted when you post your next poem…. Thank you ~ Always & Forever *LINDA"

John Posey

Date: 5/19/2013 2:22:00 AM

Some people are destined to write so eloquently about such painful things... You are surely one of them.... great writing covering the truth of something so real.... Jake

Poet Tacito

Date: 5/18/2013 11:49:00 PM

Absolutely. Go up from here...well done on this piece!

Tim Ryerson

Date: 5/18/2013 3:27:00 PM

Yes, you will be alright, Danyelle and you are easing the pain of the past by expressing it so brutally yet beautifully...Looking forward to reading more - Tim