Ilkley Tarn

biting cold nipping
on footpath across the mere
a window to life

© Harry J Horsman  2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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August 13, 2017 at 4:59 AM
I don't think people outside our little sphere are familiar with the word "Mere", Harry. A mire, Carol, is a piece of swampy land--A mere is a stretch of shallow water that is broad in appearance...they are abundant in counties like Cheshire for instance. All the very best, Harry. :) john
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July 13, 2017 at 9:44 PM
P.S. Or, maybe you meant "moor". ???
Duet Avatar
July 13, 2017 at 9:41 PM
I really like this one, Harry, but if you don't mind my recommendation: I think you mean "mire" instead of "mere". ;)
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July 14, 2017 at 5:53 AM
Oh dear Carole, always pleased to except advice, but if you are of this planet, i'm sure with some research you'll find 'mere' is the correct word for what i had in mind...Harry
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July 11, 2017 at 7:49 PM
Harry, my friend, where is a new poem? It has been a while now!! Thanks for seeing my recent writing!
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June 18, 2017 at 5:11 PM
Just came here to say hi, and I miss you. I saw your comment at the blog about certain "bloggers" and loved what you had to say!
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June 6, 2017 at 7:42 PM
I',m sure in January it was. It's been a long time since I've been here but maybe I'm back. Thanks for putting me at the top of your list. John.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 30, 2017 at 9:12 AM
I think I'll stay inside by the fire and wait for her to come in from the cold so I can warm her.
Muideen Avatar
April 17, 2017 at 4:18 AM
What a brilliant post. Thanks for sharing.
Maverick Avatar
April 2, 2017 at 3:41 PM
Good view of the place a bit windy today though I think.' Maybe best to revisit in June..? Anyway pleased to have reddit,& soup mail I have sent you..'
Horne Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 5:43 PM
oh, love this haiku, Harry
Lamoureux Avatar
March 4, 2017 at 8:02 PM
I was hoping for a new one Harry. I hope all is well with you my friend.
Sathasivam Avatar
March 2, 2017 at 12:52 AM
Excellent. Well said and great imagery. Thanks for sharing it.
Lamoureux Avatar
February 8, 2017 at 10:25 PM
I enjoyed reading this one again. Still chilly and snowy here.
De Burca Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 1:15 PM
Wonderful Ku Harry
Ball Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 5:45 AM
Wonderful Haiku Harry, It's been snowing here for the past three days. Finally stopped this aft. Really cold out and a biting wind. February is usually the coldest month but March is right around the corner. Things will start to get better then. I hope. Then again, this is Alberta and our weather is very changeable. God Bless and a 7 from me. JB
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 1:22 AM
An excellent haiku Harry. It contains that aha moment! : ) 7
Lamoureux Avatar
February 5, 2017 at 9:06 AM
We are quite chilly here as well! Thanks for visiting and posting a comment. I always appreciate your visits.
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February 3, 2017 at 3:26 PM
I've been to the Yorkshire moors in summer, Harry, though I did not come across Ilkley Tarn. I'll have to look it up and see if it fits the picture which I'm forming in my mind. #7 // paul
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February 2, 2017 at 6:34 PM
Love this one, Harry. thanks for sharing!!!
Anish Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 9:45 PM
Fine haiku - you stuck to 5 7 5 which is all to the good! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Thirtyseven Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 9:07 AM
Does mere hold a local meaning? I love the imagery. Jan's suggestion that you are talking of the moors sounds like just the place I imagine.
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January 31, 2017 at 6:53 PM
Harry, the last few nights it has been cold in Florida and we're felt that "biting cold" by the sea. I can see the comparison to life as we have to endure all types of weather along our journeys. Excellent haiku! Hugs, Carolyn
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January 31, 2017 at 8:40 AM
Harry, I know absolutely nothing about short form poetry. I came , I read, I left this note. Thank you for visiting me Harry. All I can do is read the comments and say it must be great:)
Canerdy Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 5:40 PM
A 7 for your vivid description in so few syllables, Harry. I've never been good at haiku and appreciate those who are. Janice
Allison Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 4:37 PM
OH i love the moors Harry - so few words give me a great image:-) hugs jan xx
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