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The schism is forgotten on this day. Our insanity is hurried by the sun's sway. We stroll on the rocks without a coast. Clouds hurriedly come into view impost. When it rains, it soaks up onto the sidewalk. Passion is what gives us the capacity to talk. Our emotions are hampered by your ooze. We'll be way up that hill while you snooze.
Written: January 31, 2023

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Date: 1/31/2023 10:25:00 AM
I love your romantic little tale, of lovers caught in the rain, Lasaad. :)
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Date: 1/31/2023 9:33:00 AM
Schisms are often heartbreaking. Not in this case.
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Date: 1/31/2023 7:27:00 AM
Lasaad I really enjoy your unique themes in your Poetry, your diversity is amazing. Thank you for sharing my friend.
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