Ignoble Remains

sea-foam collects from fountains of dust
how can cremation, for you be just?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Higgins Avatar
August 5, 2009 at 12:11 PM
You are a talent my friend..this is strong..the last line is great..well done Jim.
Knop Avatar
August 5, 2009 at 6:11 AM
Hi James, good write. I like your words and thas for your comment on Lonesome at the Sea, which I wrote some years ago. You have a great talent, my friend. Gert
Brown Avatar
August 5, 2009 at 4:36 AM
Jim, now it is to early in the day for me to start thinking. I will make note and think about this after a couple more cups of coffee when I am awake. Awesome write my friend. Love, Carol
Strand Avatar
August 5, 2009 at 12:38 AM
Lot to think about in this masterpiece Jim.Rgds Brian & thanks fo your welcome comments
Jordan Avatar
August 4, 2009 at 10:30 PM
Hi James - very interesting poem - One I will have to give some thought to - I like those kind - God Bless, MJ
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