Ignoble Remains

sea-foam collects from fountains of dust how can cremation, for you be just?

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Christopher Higgins

Date: 8/5/2009 12:11:00 PM

You are a talent my friend..this is strong..the last line is great..well done Jim.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 8/5/2009 6:11:00 AM

Hi James, good write. I like your words and thas for your comment on Lonesome at the Sea, which I wrote some years ago. You have a great talent, my friend. Gert

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/5/2009 4:36:00 AM

Jim, now it is to early in the day for me to start thinking. I will make note and think about this after a couple more cups of coffee when I am awake. Awesome write my friend. Love, Carol

Brian Strand

Date: 8/5/2009 12:38:00 AM

Lot to think about in this masterpiece Jim.Rgds Brian & thanks fo your welcome comments

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/4/2009 10:30:00 PM

Hi James - very interesting poem - One I will have to give some thought to - I like those kind - God Bless, MJ