Dan Kearley Poet Rhyme

If You--Would You

If you could read my mind
Do you think it would be good?
If you could read my mind
Would you be doing it more then you should?
If you could read my mind
Do you think it would change your life?
If you could read my mind
Would it make you want to be my wife?
If you could read my mind
Would you understand the expressions on my face?
If you could read my mind
Would it make the world a stranger place? 
If you could read my mind
Would you be able to feel my heart?
If you could read my mind
Would you think I'm not that smart?
If you could read my mind
Would you understand I'm trying to reach you?
If you could read my mind
Would you realize that I finally got through?
I  Wonder  If  You  Would?



Dan Kearley:4-13-12

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Shaz Cheesman December 6, 2012 at 4:00 AM Wow what if some people could read each other's mind....to me that is definitely two people who have gotten through to each other, however i also think that if someone understands you, feels you and enjoys your presence in this world - it's because they don't need to read your mind to think those things....gr8 poem....excellent - Shaz

Elizabeth Wesley May 23, 2012 at 11:46 AM If I could read your mind I would probably be asounded; having said that what I do know is you are interesting, fun and sweet. Can't ask for much more than that. Just stay the way you are! :) Luv, Lizzy

Charmaine Chircop May 7, 2012 at 9:08 AM I bet she will .......... Lovely poem with so many questions leading to your heart... and hey thanks for the favourite :)

Carol Eastman April 30, 2012 at 2:29 PM Interesting poem... The last line...ouch.

Prince Ekpemandu April 21, 2012 at 3:00 PM nice piece

Bl Devnath April 21, 2012 at 9:20 AM Wonderful expression of passion of life with wife. My friend, untrue misses always. Loved your comment and loved always, bl

Laura Breidenthal April 19, 2012 at 12:44 PM Lovely poem and finely structured! :) Always, Laura

Black Eyed Susan April 16, 2012 at 7:00 AM Oh Dan! I have always wondered these same questions. I think for the most part, everyone would think I was an asshole. I NEED that filter that happens before I speak. Btw, isn't there a disease where people don't have that filter? anyway, I can only hope that if this ever happens to me, that my husband would feel the love and not the everyday irritations. Hopefully your wife would too! Dan Kearley April 17, 2012 at 8:09 PM Ha,ha,hahaha..I don't think your an A-hole. :o)

Laila Andresen Mjelde April 15, 2012 at 3:45 PM Wow...great write Dan, nice poem. xoxo - Laila Dan Kearley April 17, 2012 at 8:04 PM Thanks,Laila... :o)

Anne-Lise Andresen April 14, 2012 at 2:39 PM BIG HUG, Dan!!!!! Many questions at onse Dan. - Real LOVE is STRONG love !!! - f.e.f. oxox Anne-Lise Dan Kearley April 17, 2012 at 8:03 PM Thanks,Anne-Lise.. :o) F.e.f oxox

Suni Gecko April 14, 2012 at 12:52 AM i really like the line "If you could read my mind Would you be able to feel my heart?". nice poem! Dan Kearley April 14, 2012 at 10:27 AM Thank you! :o) I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Andrea Dietrich April 13, 2012 at 5:49 PM Dan, I enjoy reading your thoughts. Sure hope you are not serious on some of these questions. I think you are one smart cookie!! Dan Kearley April 14, 2012 at 10:29 AM Awwww,Thank you(blush) :o)

Diana Mohammed April 13, 2012 at 4:03 PM I'm glad you shared this Dan.. Dan Kearley April 14, 2012 at 10:28 AM Thank you,Diana :o)