If Your Ready

EXCUSE ME!!!
WILL YOU PLEASE INTERVENE IM FEELING BOMBARDED BY KNOWLEDGE FEENS
they want me to share and teach the way only they plug their ears at what i have to say

its RAW its REAL its POWERFUL stuff nothing im telling you is at all a BLUFF

VILLANS and BANGERS and PIMPS and HOES ALL HUSTLE for money cause on trees it DONT 
grow 

GRIMMY you call them cause they know how to survive but you go on welfare and breast 
feed till your childs five

you call them freaks cause they speak the truth but you say that your phsyic and hide in a 
booth             

the streets are real no favorites or winners everyones a player even the sinners

BIG LIES LITTLE LIES WHITE LIES SO WHAT bet you didnt know your CORRUPT

they say that SOCIETY has the right of the way i followed my rules and im here today

i astonish myself with the life i lived now its my turn to turn around and give

if you want it i got it its KNOWLEDGE ABOUT LIFE but you must stop living TRIFE

MY MESSAGE IS TO BE HEARD AMONGST YOU ALL BUT WHAT YOU ARE MISSING IS TO HEAR 
HIS CALL!!!!!!!!!!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 5/26/2009 7:11:00 AM
Brandy, we can work together anytime..love to write with you.
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Date: 5/25/2009 9:12:00 PM
interesting, very interesting my dear, but i liked it. the flow, the words, the visions. as always you make us wonder :)
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