If You Were

If you were a painting
You would be a painting of the sky
If you were a book
You would be ``A Catcher in the Rye``
If you were a bird
You would fly high, so high
So please, don`t be shy
Because your dreams will die
So please, don`t deny
That you can do anything
If you just try
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Okubo Avatar
January 15, 2014 at 7:22 AM
Just lovely and very encouraging.. Beautifully penned Vesna.
Anish Avatar
September 26, 2013 at 10:22 PM
Encouraging words here! Peacde & Love Matthew Anish
Bacha Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 8:11 AM
What an outstanding poem, full of sending messages in a very artistic way. Love Terry xoxo A Fave......and a 7 >>>>>
Horsman Avatar
April 28, 2013 at 7:37 AM
What wonderful poetry this is Vesna, so positive, so inspiring...
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April 26, 2013 at 8:45 PM
I love it all. A very sweet poem and thought. charming. ~SKAT
Sathasivam Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 4:50 AM
Excellent. Beautiful write. Enjoyed. Tfs
Dietrich Avatar
April 22, 2013 at 2:47 PM
how cool calling someone Catcher in the Rye!! that was so creative.
Mcconnell Avatar
April 22, 2013 at 3:50 AM
really good and encouraging write, a very enjoyable read. great stuff, have a blessed day, Gordon
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 22, 2013 at 2:14 AM
Nice one, and I totally agree with your wonderful write xx
Posey Avatar
April 21, 2013 at 4:35 PM
You have talent and you show it...Now all who read your posts will know it... great job, my dear.. Jake
Kendrick Avatar
April 21, 2013 at 2:08 PM
I like the flow to this one..Great thoughts penned..It says that you think some very good thoughts about someone..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..I'll tell Cindy that you like her..Sara
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