Vijay Pandit Poet Rhyme

If You Take Me Beyond My Dream

Come join me in my secret reverie

Conversing in language of bliss

As discourse of our sensuous lips

Seduces me with a romantic kiss.


Be forewarned, I will awaken all

Hollering distress in my scream

Thwarting advent of passionate zeal

If you take me beyond my dream.

January 18, 2019
Placed first in contest #550 by Brian Strand

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Sara Kendrick December 29, 2022 at 8:32 AM Wow!! You caught Brian's eye with this winner. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Line Gauthier February 11, 2019 at 10:34 PM Congrats on your win, Vijay.

Andrea Dietrich February 1, 2019 at 6:47 PM So glad this made the cut in Brian's contest. It's one of yours I have really liked.

Richard Nah February 1, 2019 at 2:40 PM This is poetry! Great write. Vijay Pandit February 1, 2019 at 5:23 PM Thank you Richard..appreciate your visit and comments.

Jean Murray January 26, 2019 at 5:48 PM Two strong emotions all wrapped up in one embrace of a poem. Love it Vijay. Vijay Pandit February 1, 2019 at 5:22 PM Thank you Jean..always happy to read your feedback.

Jennifer Proxenos January 25, 2019 at 11:25 PM Hi Vijay, you write such beautiful poems and I'v missed visiting your page - these two romantic verses bring love alive! Great write, Poetry hugs, Jennifer Vijay Pandit February 1, 2019 at 5:22 PM Many thanks Jennifer. Appreciate your visit and kind feedback.

Charles Messina January 21, 2019 at 6:16 PM Wow, you make me almost want to kiss you Vijay (LOL) Great poem my friend, there are sensuous lips for everyone, some just need to be found. Vijay Pandit January 22, 2019 at 4:28 PM Thank you Charles.

Andrea Dietrich January 21, 2019 at 5:11 PM thanks for your visit today, Vijay. I await a new poem from you! Vijay Pandit January 22, 2019 at 4:27 PM Soon..thanks Andrea.

Mike Gentile January 21, 2019 at 9:53 AM I wish for you a long and passionate dream Vijay. Romance in reverie, Well done!! Vijay Pandit January 22, 2019 at 4:27 PM Thank you Mike.

Richard Lamoureux January 21, 2019 at 9:08 AM I hopereality eclipses your dream. Vijay Pandit January 22, 2019 at 4:27 PM Thank you Richard.

Andrea Dietrich January 19, 2019 at 7:27 PM Love this. I really hate when good dreams get interrupted, though I don't have super good dreams, just fun ones that are like fiction that I am writing! Glad you posted a new poem for me to read today, Vijay Vijay Pandit January 20, 2019 at 8:00 AM Thank you Andrea. I truly appreciate and value your feedback.

Besma Riabi Dziri January 19, 2019 at 3:30 PM A due respect given to a poet whose pen flowing with Love and wonder! Amazing avid readers with unique beauties.. sweet dreams and "beyond the dream"! Always a great pleasure to read your wonderful poetry dear Vijay.. Best regards. God bless you. Vijay Pandit January 20, 2019 at 7:34 AM Always a cherished smile in your comments..many thanks Besma. Regards.

Nette Onclaud January 19, 2019 at 1:25 PM a dream-like stage such as this is beyond amazing... fascinated by your tonality and content, vijay... for kevin's?.. huggs Vijay Pandit January 19, 2019 at 1:27 PM No not for a contest. Thank you Nette.

Mystic Rose Rose January 19, 2019 at 9:01 AM "Hottering" now there is a word that sizzles on the tongue, nice one Vij, hope you have a wonderful day . Hugs xo Vijay Pandit January 19, 2019 at 1:26 PM Thank you Pixie.

Joseph May January 19, 2019 at 8:49 AM Beyond the dream lies ecstasy..Beautiful write Vijay.. Vijay Pandit January 19, 2019 at 1:26 PM Thank you Joseph.

Silent One January 19, 2019 at 8:30 AM Beautiful words Vijay.. Vijay Pandit January 19, 2019 at 1:26 PM Thank you Silent One.

Paul Callus January 19, 2019 at 7:21 AM Dreams, passion and romance...the possibilities can be endless, Vijay, as this powerful poem suggests! Regards // paul Vijay Pandit January 19, 2019 at 7:37 AM Many thanks Paul..appreciate your visit and kind feedback. Regards.

Lawrence Sharp January 19, 2019 at 1:10 AM Brief, but with great impact. Nicely written, my friend. Vijay Pandit January 19, 2019 at 7:36 AM Thank you Lawrence..appreciate the kind feedback.

Heidi Sands January 18, 2019 at 5:32 PM Wow! A powerful, romantic poem Vijay! :) Well done! Vijay Pandit January 19, 2019 at 7:35 AM Thank you Heidi..always a pleasure to read your comments.

Carolyn Devonshire January 18, 2019 at 4:14 PM Such an uplifting poem is just what I needed to read today, Vijay. I'd like to live in a dream world filled with reverie, bliss and passion. Awesome write, my friend! Hugs, Carolyn Vijay Pandit January 19, 2019 at 7:34 AM Appreciate the kind remarks, Carolyn..many many thanks.

Charlie Smith January 18, 2019 at 4:14 PM "beyond my dream" Love it Vijay, well done... Vijay Pandit January 19, 2019 at 7:35 AM Thank you Charlie..appreciate the kind remarks.

Brandy Nicole January 18, 2019 at 3:45 PM Anything can happen in a dream!! The possibilities are endless. Oh my, yes!!! Beyond the stars, moments capture such bliss, as the melody of love vibrates everything. Lips echoing the passion. This is so beautiful and romantic. Sweet and sensual. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit January 19, 2019 at 7:34 AM Many thanks for the generous feedback Brandy..I appreciate your visit and comments.

Tom Cunningham January 18, 2019 at 3:11 PM Very romantic verse Vijay, have a great weekend. Tom. Vijay Pandit January 19, 2019 at 7:33 AM Thank you Tom.

Anne-Lise Andresen January 18, 2019 at 3:04 PM - Romantic writing, I enjoy it :) - Happy weekend, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit January 19, 2019 at 7:33 AM Thank you Anne-Lise.