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If You Take Me Beyond My Dream

Come join me in my secret reverie Conversing in language of bliss As discourse of our sensuous lips Seduces me with a romantic kiss. Be forewarned, I will awaken all Hollering distress in my scream Thwarting advent of passionate zeal If you take me beyond my dream. January 18, 2019 Placed first in contest #550 by Brian Strand

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/29/2022 8:32:00 AM

Wow!! You caught Brian's eye with this winner. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/11/2019 10:34:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Vijay.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/1/2019 6:47:00 PM

So glad this made the cut in Brian's contest. It's one of yours I have really liked.

Richard Nah

Date: 2/1/2019 2:40:00 PM

This is poetry! Great write.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/1/2019 5:23:00 PM

Thank you Richard..appreciate your visit and comments.

Jean Murray

Date: 1/26/2019 5:48:00 PM

Two strong emotions all wrapped up in one embrace of a poem. Love it Vijay.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/1/2019 5:22:00 PM

Thank you Jean..always happy to read your feedback.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/25/2019 11:25:00 PM

Hi Vijay, you write such beautiful poems and I'v missed visiting your page - these two romantic verses bring love alive! Great write, Poetry hugs, Jennifer

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/1/2019 5:22:00 PM

Many thanks Jennifer. Appreciate your visit and kind feedback.

Charles Messina

Date: 1/21/2019 6:16:00 PM

Wow, you make me almost want to kiss you Vijay (LOL) Great poem my friend, there are sensuous lips for everyone, some just need to be found.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/22/2019 4:28:00 PM

Thank you Charles.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/21/2019 5:11:00 PM

thanks for your visit today, Vijay. I await a new poem from you!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/22/2019 4:27:00 PM

Soon..thanks Andrea.

Mike Gentile

Date: 1/21/2019 9:53:00 AM

I wish for you a long and passionate dream Vijay. Romance in reverie, Well done!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/22/2019 4:27:00 PM

Thank you Mike.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/21/2019 9:08:00 AM

I hopereality eclipses your dream.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/22/2019 4:27:00 PM

Thank you Richard.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/19/2019 7:27:00 PM

Love this. I really hate when good dreams get interrupted, though I don't have super good dreams, just fun ones that are like fiction that I am writing! Glad you posted a new poem for me to read today, Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/20/2019 8:00:00 AM

Thank you Andrea. I truly appreciate and value your feedback.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 1/19/2019 3:30:00 PM

A due respect given to a poet whose pen flowing with Love and wonder! Amazing avid readers with unique beauties.. sweet dreams and "beyond the dream"! Always a great pleasure to read your wonderful poetry dear Vijay.. Best regards. God bless you.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/20/2019 7:34:00 AM

Always a cherished smile in your comments..many thanks Besma. Regards.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/19/2019 1:25:00 PM

a dream-like stage such as this is beyond amazing... fascinated by your tonality and content, vijay... for kevin's?.. huggs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/19/2019 1:27:00 PM

No not for a contest. Thank you Nette.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 1/19/2019 9:01:00 AM

"Hottering" now there is a word that sizzles on the tongue, nice one Vij, hope you have a wonderful day . Hugs xo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/19/2019 1:26:00 PM

Thank you Pixie.

Joseph May

Date: 1/19/2019 8:49:00 AM

Beyond the dream lies ecstasy..Beautiful write Vijay..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/19/2019 1:26:00 PM

Thank you Joseph.

Silent One

Date: 1/19/2019 8:30:00 AM

Beautiful words Vijay..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/19/2019 1:26:00 PM

Thank you Silent One.

Paul Callus

Date: 1/19/2019 7:21:00 AM

Dreams, passion and romance...the possibilities can be endless, Vijay, as this powerful poem suggests! Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/19/2019 7:37:00 AM

Many thanks Paul..appreciate your visit and kind feedback. Regards.

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 1/19/2019 1:10:00 AM

Brief, but with great impact. Nicely written, my friend.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/19/2019 7:36:00 AM

Thank you Lawrence..appreciate the kind feedback.

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/18/2019 5:32:00 PM

Wow! A powerful, romantic poem Vijay! :) Well done!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/19/2019 7:35:00 AM

Thank you Heidi..always a pleasure to read your comments.

Charlie Smith

Date: 1/18/2019 4:14:00 PM

"beyond my dream" Love it Vijay, well done...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/19/2019 7:35:00 AM

Thank you Charlie..appreciate the kind remarks.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/18/2019 4:14:00 PM

Such an uplifting poem is just what I needed to read today, Vijay. I'd like to live in a dream world filled with reverie, bliss and passion. Awesome write, my friend! Hugs, Carolyn

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/19/2019 7:34:00 AM

Appreciate the kind remarks, Carolyn..many many thanks.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/18/2019 3:45:00 PM

Anything can happen in a dream!! The possibilities are endless. Oh my, yes!!! Beyond the stars, moments capture such bliss, as the melody of love vibrates everything. Lips echoing the passion. This is so beautiful and romantic. Sweet and sensual. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/19/2019 7:34:00 AM

Many thanks for the generous feedback Brandy..I appreciate your visit and comments.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/18/2019 3:11:00 PM

Very romantic verse Vijay, have a great weekend. Tom.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/19/2019 7:33:00 AM

Thank you Tom.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/18/2019 3:04:00 PM

- Romantic writing, I enjoy it :) - Happy weekend, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/19/2019 7:33:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise.