Casarah Nance Poet Rhyme

If You Knew

If you knew it was your words that comfort me,
a blanket to hold me in my insecurity,
a light in the dark, a flame to keep me warm,
you are the umbrella to shield me from the storm.

But I don't know how to tell you you're the one,
my words are frayed like a sweater coming undone.
I'm quietly screaming to get your attention,
please for a moment look in my direction!

If you knew you're the reason I rise from bed
in the morning you're the first thought in my head.
Would you be my pillow, be more than a dream,
fill my galaxy with a kiss like a moonbeam.

What would happen if our worlds collide?
until then, in the shadows I hide.

If you knew I wrote this poem just for you,
what would you do? what would you do?

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Moses Gava August 28, 2018 at 3:18 AM well...what would i do? i would simply tell you that you are the only reason why i read this poem....because i knew you had something to tell to me. Wonderful lovely piece ,i wish to have a carrying lover like the one above

Robert Johnson July 11, 2018 at 6:55 PM Beautifully expressed sense of insecurity that makes love even sweeter if it ever is heard. :)

Robert Johnson July 11, 2018 at 6:52 PM The mystic space between two hearts where dreams sometimes get lost. Can leave you holding back your love at such an awful cost. If this is true then let your words be clear. So that the one you've fallen for can hear. :)

Vladislav Raven June 30, 2018 at 5:52 PM Hi Casarah, this is such a beautiful write, words that come straight from the heart onto the page. This is the kind of poetry i really like to read. The words sing straight into the heart. Let your heart sing and you shall never go wrong. A gentle song that sings into my faves. Have a wonderful Sunday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Brandy Nicole June 28, 2018 at 9:39 PM You whisper words of longing love, and the heart certainly feels each one. This is o beautiful, filled with many emotions. ~ Brandy Casarah Nance June 29, 2018 at 8:27 AM Thank you Brandy ;)

Alexis Y. June 28, 2018 at 6:57 PM WoW! Casarah, I see why Lyric got inspired to write a echo. If he knew, you would be be his pillow and so much more,he would turn your dream into reality, and go to the shadows and bring you into the light. Good content and rhymes. Excellent job. It's good to you posting again. Welcome back:-) Alexis Casarah Nance June 29, 2018 at 8:27 AM Thank you! I appreciate your comments, great big hug :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty June 28, 2018 at 11:26 AM delightful...especially the repetition in the last line...Great one Casarah. Hugs! Casarah Nance June 29, 2018 at 8:24 AM Thank you my friend hugs

Lyric Man June 28, 2018 at 10:29 AM You know this is my kind of write.. Cas, (echo alert) Casarah Nance June 29, 2018 at 8:23 AM Glad to be a muse to a muse. thank you

Tim Smith June 28, 2018 at 9:03 AM Certainly not me you're speaking of lol. Lucky if I get anyone to read mine at all lately..great Cas Casarah Nance June 29, 2018 at 8:23 AM You know I do enjoy chatting with you and reading your words. many hugs my friend x