If You Can'T Stand the Heat

Oh, my dear, 'tis plain to see
That you lack Humility
Why must you whine o'er rugged rhymes,
That ill-affect your poetry?

Helping hands are hither slapped,
At a mere suggestion
In thine self, bruised ego wrapped
When thy work is questioned!

Begrudge, me not, the better Poet:
I was right, and both we know it!

*I SPIT FIRE CONTEST ENTRY

for herpoetryrhyme

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Robin Davis

Date: 12/20/2013 9:16:00 AM

Chan The Man This is both hilarious and violent at the same time. I hope I'm never berated like this by you. I promise to be a good girl. HEE HEE Thanks for the incredible comment on my Universe poem. Hugs and Love Sweet Pea

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 12/20/2013 9:18:00 AM

My Sweet Revenge Poem lol thanks, Sweet Pea ;)

Mark Peterson

Date: 11/29/2013 11:35:00 AM

Deftly pointed. Glad I'm not on the receiving end. Congratulations, stated with admiration.

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 11/30/2013 7:37:00 AM

Thanks, Mark! I was pleasantly surprised that F.J. picked this as a second place winner; I am humbled and grateful. I appreciate the congrats :)

Jake Ponce

Date: 10/13/2013 7:43:00 AM

HAHAHAHA I almost drowned while drinking coffee. This is artistically hilarious! ...well now I feel a bit sorry for whomever this was aimed at :o

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/13/2013 7:57:00 AM

A foolish person wrote a poem aimed at me for giving her "constructive criticism" on one of her pieces, so I decided to trash her, in an eloquent, yet humorous way lol. Thanks for dropping by and for all the reviews, Jake :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/10/2013 10:49:00 PM

hahaha, this one is pretty cool!!

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/11/2013 7:35:00 AM

lol thanks. My REVENGE poem! Thanks for the read and reply, Andrea :)

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 9/14/2013 6:45:00 PM

I read elsewhere in one of your comments you're a rhymester. I had to come check out your work and I'm happy I did. This is my first of yours and definitely not my last. I love your style (long name). Licia :-)

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 9/15/2013 9:53:00 AM

Hi, Licia. I must confess that "rhyming" is really my only poetic forte; I feel it's what I do best and it makes me happy to hear that you enjoy my style; makes me feel immeasurably good inside; thank you. This was a "revenge poem" so if you like my work, I implore you to go back and read earlier posts. Thanks for dropping by, and you can call me TAP, in short :)