If You Are Really Pure

A girl with so many sorrows
yet she is happy in this mean world.
No one sees her tears 
Or is it that they can't see?
They are hidden behind 
her beautiful eyes, 
which deceives them and,
make them think 
she is the one they are looking for.
No one, I mean no one,
sees her golden tears
they are after the gold,
and don’t even bother about her tear.
They actually have nothing to do with her,
its her innocence which 
they use meanly to the fullest.
I challenge the world they are blind.
Yes I am sure to say,
They are completely blind
Because, its not the outer body we see
It's the inner soul that should be pure.
Yes I am still sure,
the pure soul can make us cheer
not the physical body gives us pleasure.
I challenge the whole world,
they show me if anyone is really happy.
Yes I mean it, Real happiness,
lies not behind the physical body 
but the soul.
The body, it's hated even if there's a single hole,
but as for the soul,
nothing, I mean nothing,  
can create hatred 
if you are really pure..
if you are really pure….
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Agustin Avatar
November 8, 2024 at 10:11 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 8:20 AM
Kallol Dahal, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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January 7, 2016 at 1:14 AM
Kallol, Enjoyed reading your poem, Forever ~SKAT~
Eckiwaudah Avatar
July 22, 2009 at 11:21 AM
nice write. always, cherica lynn <3
Guzzi Avatar
July 19, 2009 at 5:55 PM
Thanks for reading my verse on Nepal. There are more that I wrote when I visited. If you'd like to know which ones soup mail me please. You may appreciate my new Verse Food for Thought...Light & Love
Freeman Avatar
July 10, 2009 at 2:08 PM
Purity is who you really are, which is love. Although the natural mind will lead you astray, if you let it. Good Job, Love Moses
Guzzi Avatar
July 7, 2009 at 10:45 AM
I do like the concept above and welcome to the soup..purity is a matter open for much discussion and the cause of much pain. Light & Love..PS I have a few poems about Nepal..you may like
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