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If You Are Really Pure

A girl with so many sorrows yet she is happy in this mean world. No one sees her tears Or is it that they can't see? They are hidden behind her beautiful eyes, which deceives them and, make them think she is the one they are looking for. No one, I mean no one, sees her golden tears they are after the gold, and don’t even bother about her tear. They actually have nothing to do with her, its her innocence which they use meanly to the fullest. I challenge the world they are blind. Yes I am sure to say, They are completely blind Because, its not the outer body we see It's the inner soul that should be pure. Yes I am still sure, the pure soul can make us cheer not the physical body gives us pleasure. I challenge the whole world, they show me if anyone is really happy. Yes I mean it, Real happiness, lies not behind the physical body but the soul. The body, it's hated even if there's a single hole, but as for the soul, nothing, I mean nothing, can create hatred if you are really pure.. if you are really pure….

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Date: 2/28/2016 8:20:00 AM
Kallol Dahal, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/7/2016 1:14:00 AM
Kallol, Enjoyed reading your poem, Forever ~SKAT~
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Date: 7/22/2009 11:21:00 AM
nice write. always, cherica lynn <3
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Date: 7/19/2009 5:55:00 PM
Thanks for reading my verse on Nepal. There are more that I wrote when I visited. If you'd like to know which ones soup mail me please. You may appreciate my new Verse Food for Thought...Light & Love
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Date: 7/10/2009 2:08:00 PM
Purity is who you really are, which is love. Although the natural mind will lead you astray, if you let it. Good Job, Love Moses
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Date: 7/7/2009 10:45:00 AM
I do like the concept above and welcome to the soup..purity is a matter open for much discussion and the cause of much pain. Light & Love..PS I have a few poems about Nepal..you may like
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