If We Could Switch Shoes

If you could step into my shoes
Would you see the things I see,
Would your head feel dizzy like mine is now
Or would you still walk easily?

If I resisted like you do
Would I be this wreck of a girl,
Do you think I'd have turned out stronger?
... A lighter step, a happy twirl

If I was as white as you are
(Or as you seem to be)
Would I be someone's angel too?
Like the angel you are to me.

If you could step in my shoes
Would you understand my pain,
Would you have fallen just as hard
Or do you think it was all in vain?

Take a look through my eyes
And tell me what I'm doing wrong
Tell me how to fix it all
Whether the situation be short or long.

If you could step in my shoes
You'd see much better than I
Your beauty, wisdom, pure intent
Is enough to make me cry

If I could step in your shoes
I wonder what I'd see,
Would the world become more beautiful;
Does it all depend on me?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Noble Ayi Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 8:35 AM
People don't know how others feel so they just criticise without limit . People go through a lot and they see things different from what others do , it's only God who gives us the strength to survive the day, weeks,months and years. Juli , this is a deep piece. You are a great poet . May God almighty grant you a lot for us. Keep it up.
Richards Avatar
April 6, 2014 at 6:54 PM
I have often pondered these things in the same way. We cannot judge someone else, until we have walked a mile in their shoes/lives. We may all have much more insight and understanding afterwards. Nicely said !! Ps.....I have just discovered my placement in your last rhyme contest....I'm so sorry to be late in saying thanks very much for the recognition !! Thank you!!
Almurisi Avatar
April 3, 2013 at 12:11 PM
GREAT AND SO NICE POEM I HOPE YOU THE BEST
Jones Avatar
March 28, 2013 at 8:46 PM
Magnificent Juli. Point well made and taken....Donna
Ink-U-Script Avatar
March 28, 2013 at 1:05 PM
OOOOOoooo.I so love this poem of yours here..A fav!!!
Michelle Avatar
March 28, 2013 at 10:03 PM
Thank you!!
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