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If Tomorrow Came

If tommorow came and I said to you, that you are all I'd ever need. Baby you're so much a part of me, it's your blood that I bleed. Every breath I take is your breath, because you have given me life. Until I met you, felt your touch, I never dreamed I'd be your wife. Now if you join me as you say, we become one soul, and yes one heart. Our journey toward our beautiful future, and to each others world be a part. If tommorow came and I said,"baby", I don't want to live without you. Tell me babe would you come to me, and say you feel the same way too?...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/5/2008 2:11:00 PM
This is a wonderful poem. It flows very well and is quite expressive. I like the ending with the rhetorical question. Welcome to PoetrySoup. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 9/4/2008 3:50:00 PM
Nice use of rhyme for a musical feel to this poem. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 9/3/2008 9:22:00 AM
Nicely written love song. Vince
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