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If These Verses Have Caused You Much Pain

If these verses have caused you much pain Then, I have succeeded I have won the war with words And I have made you sweat If you are crying Then, I can die happy Knowing that I have been effective In your self-pity If you regret your life and every breath you take Then, I’ll know that my words held you by the throat Clutching your neck with loaded metaphors And if you never move on Then, I won’t be the only one

Copyright © | Year Posted 2005




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