Komal Walimbe Poet Rhyme

If the World Was Ending

What will u do if the world was ending one day
Rush for the survival or look for the other way
Will u run with the stampede
Even though you know you will bleed

Or will u just rest at ease
And say "I just want some peace"
Will you hug your dearest
And promise to love them back sincerest
Cause at the end
What's the point in living a life in vain

10/8/22

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Michael Tor September 26, 2022 at 5:16 PM The bible says those in Christ will not experience all this doomsday scenario but will be taken up before in the rapture. Just by receiving Jesus into your heart and asking for forgiveness and reading your bible and learning of his love for you and commandments you will never suffer in what is coming I feel as soon. Be blessed Komal and know you are loved by Jesus Christ of Nazareth... Komal Walimbe September 27, 2022 at 4:24 AM Thank you so much for this wonderful message, I recently had a dream about the same and decided to write a poem about it. Yes, God is what I believe in. Everyday is a gift from God, so live life the fullest! Glad you visited my page! :)

Sotto Poet September 19, 2022 at 7:06 AM Komal, you have done an outstanding job with this. Your closing statement sums everything well. A deep message about life that you share. Komal Walimbe September 20, 2022 at 2:12 AM Thank you so much...glad you liked it! Have a great day!:)

Marco Chies August 15, 2022 at 7:08 PM A beautiful and intriguing poetry, my dear friend! Komal Walimbe August 15, 2022 at 8:42 PM Thank you Marco for your kind words! Have a great day!:)

David Kavanagh August 15, 2022 at 2:00 PM Heya Komal, have you seen the movie (Melancholia) directed by Lars Von Trier, I think the ending is a beautiful and uplifting way, to see out the end of the world, your poem reflects this quite brilliantly, cheers David Komal Walimbe August 15, 2022 at 8:41 PM Ohh, thank you David for your kind comment. No, I haven't seen the movie but sure will search about it. Have a great day!:)

Brandy Nicole August 13, 2022 at 4:30 PM Such a thought provoking write. You're right, no sense in trying to survive. Hold dear ones so close, and feel the love. This is tender and emotional, all at the same time. Many wonderful blessings to you, Komal. Hugs, Brandy Komal Walimbe August 13, 2022 at 10:21 PM Thank you Brandy for visiting, glad you liked this poem and found it thought provoking. I was just daydreaming when this thought struck in my head! Thanks for the blessings dear! Have a great day :)

Gordon Mcconnell August 11, 2022 at 12:10 PM Nice penning Komal, with good rhyme and flow with really good imagery too. This also poses such an important question which we must all be sure to be ready when God calls us. Blessings always,Gordon Komal Walimbe August 12, 2022 at 2:14 AM Thank you Gordon for your kind reply! Glad you liked it... I was just wondering about this when I decided to write a poem on it... Have a great day! :)

Vijay Pandit August 11, 2022 at 5:12 AM Your ending line says it all. A profound life message you convey. Komal Walimbe August 11, 2022 at 6:58 AM Thank you Vijay for visiting my page! Glad you liked it! It just struck in my head that time... :)