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If She Knew Would She Run

if she understood his full evilness in his utter selfishness would her love for him wane if she discerned his mysterious self hidden away quite nicely would she take love and run?

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/14/2018 5:46:00 AM

I think I would run and fast.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/14/2018 6:02:00 AM

You and I would be tripping each other, to get out of there.

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 12/14/2018 12:06:00 AM

depends on theory of relativity ! /// lovely

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/14/2018 6:02:00 AM

thank you Mahtab.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 12/13/2018 6:57:00 PM

Sadly, those "mysteries" are often not nearly as wonderful as we imagine them to be ... even disappointing. Better to spend love on someone without the intrigue. Love this write, Caren! :-)

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/13/2018 9:00:00 PM

Thank you so much. I certainly do appreciate it, Gregory.

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 12/13/2018 12:48:00 PM

Sadly, sometimes it's not whether she knows... but how much self esteem she has. ;( Thoughtful write.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/13/2018 9:00:00 PM

Sadly, it is also sometimes the threat of him keeping the children, as the ones who "manipulate" truly do become psychological masters.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/13/2018 7:34:00 AM

That’s the question!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/13/2018 8:37:00 AM

Me thinks not.