Caren Krutsinger Poet Kimo

If She Knew Would She Run

if she understood his full evilness
in his utter selfishness
would her love for him wane

if she discerned his mysterious self
hidden away quite nicely
would she take love and run?

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M. L. Kiser December 14, 2018 at 5:46 AM I think I would run and fast. Caren Krutsinger December 14, 2018 at 6:02 AM You and I would be tripping each other, to get out of there.

Mahtab Bangalee December 14, 2018 at 12:06 AM depends on theory of relativity ! /// lovely Caren Krutsinger December 14, 2018 at 6:02 AM thank you Mahtab.

Gregory Richard Barden December 13, 2018 at 6:57 PM Sadly, those "mysteries" are often not nearly as wonderful as we imagine them to be ... even disappointing. Better to spend love on someone without the intrigue. Love this write, Caren! :-) Caren Krutsinger December 13, 2018 at 9:00 PM Thank you so much. I certainly do appreciate it, Gregory.

Rhona Mcferran December 13, 2018 at 12:48 PM Sadly, sometimes it's not whether she knows... but how much self esteem she has. ;( Thoughtful write. Caren Krutsinger December 13, 2018 at 9:00 PM Sadly, it is also sometimes the threat of him keeping the children, as the ones who "manipulate" truly do become psychological masters.

Kim Rodrigues December 13, 2018 at 7:34 AM That’s the question! Caren Krutsinger December 13, 2018 at 8:37 AM Me thinks not.