If Only We Had More Time

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I'd have whispered, "you're daddy's little boy,"
my everything, my bundle of joy.
We would have explored the cafes, parks, and glades,
snapping photos and improving your grades.
We would have gazed up at the stars above
feeling secure in the bond of our love.
And together, we would have shared the earth,
rejoicing in the miracle of your birth.
If only we had more time...

I would have explained the golden rule,
teaching you the lessons not taught in school.
And during your early, formative years,
I would have nursed your hurts and wiped your tears.
You would have entered your teens chasing dreams,
Defiant, in your tee-shirt and blue jeans.
And we would have discussed the birds and bees,
learning about life as you skinned your knees.
If only we had more time...

My heart would have filled with a father's pride
when you knelt at the altar with your bride.
The tears I saved to bless your wedding day
are not able to wash my grief away.
You spent six months amongst those who loved you,
and we gather here today to wish you adieu. 
I think of all the things we would have done,
but fate chose to take you away, my son.
If only we had more time...


(Rhyme)


2/26/2016

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Phil Capitano

Date: 11/9/2016 3:57:00 AM

Loss is deeply personal but your wish for more time is universal. Beautifully written.

Emile Pinet
Date: 11/9/2016 2:03:00 PM

Thanks Phil, I appreciate your support. Emile.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 2/27/2016 8:42:00 PM

What a sad piece, and even sadder story. I can't imagine the heartbreak of going through this ... life is full of what-ifs and choices, and though some of them are regretful, some aren't blessed with even the option of making them. My heart goes out to you to Emile, and your nephew. May he find peace.

Emile Pinet
Date: 2/28/2016 8:00:00 AM

Thank you Timothy, we are both moved by you compassion. Emile.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 2/26/2016 10:05:00 PM

This of course brings tears to the eyes, anyone who has children or is around children, well it brings shivers just to think this happens! I cant imagine such pain, you have done a wonderful job expressing this! A7

Emile Pinet
Date: 2/27/2016 8:00:00 AM

Thanks Arthur, I truly appreciate your comments. Emile.