Emile Pinet Poet Rhyme

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If Only We Had More Time

I'd have whispered, "you're daddy's little boy,"
my everything, my bundle of joy.
We would have explored the cafes, parks, and glades,
snapping photos and improving your grades.
We would have gazed up at the stars above
feeling secure in the bond of our love.
And together, we would have shared the earth,
rejoicing in the miracle of your birth.
If only we had more time...

I would have explained the golden rule,
teaching you the lessons not taught in school.
And during your early, formative years,
I would have nursed your hurts and wiped your tears.
You would have entered your teens chasing dreams,
Defiant, in your tee-shirt and blue jeans.
And we would have discussed the birds and bees,
learning about life as you skinned your knees.
If only we had more time...

My heart would have filled with a father's pride
when you knelt at the altar with your bride.
The tears I saved to bless your wedding day
are not able to wash my grief away.
You spent six months amongst those who loved you,
and we gather here today to wish you adieu. 
I think of all the things we would have done,
but fate chose to take you away, my son.
If only we had more time...


(Rhyme)


2/26/2016

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Phil Capitano November 9, 2016 at 3:57 AM Loss is deeply personal but your wish for more time is universal. Beautifully written. Emile Pinet November 9, 2016 at 2:03 PM Thanks Phil, I appreciate your support. Emile.

Timothy Hicks February 27, 2016 at 8:42 PM What a sad piece, and even sadder story. I can't imagine the heartbreak of going through this ... life is full of what-ifs and choices, and though some of them are regretful, some aren't blessed with even the option of making them. My heart goes out to you to Emile, and your nephew. May he find peace. Emile Pinet February 28, 2016 at 8:00 AM Thank you Timothy, we are both moved by you compassion. Emile.

Arthur Vaso February 26, 2016 at 10:05 PM This of course brings tears to the eyes, anyone who has children or is around children, well it brings shivers just to think this happens! I cant imagine such pain, you have done a wonderful job expressing this! A7 Emile Pinet February 27, 2016 at 8:00 AM Thanks Arthur, I truly appreciate your comments. Emile.

Andrea Dietrich February 26, 2016 at 7:44 PM oh, my. This is so sad, Emile. You wrote a heart tugging poem here and I am sorry for your loss. Emile Pinet February 27, 2016 at 7:59 AM Thank you Andrea, I appreciate your comments and condolences. Emile.