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If Only We Could Turn Back the Hands of Time

I loved a story at bedtime, but I could do a nap in the daytime. Before I knew it I was nine, boy was that a great pie made out of limes. I would then go back to my prime, and really really shine. There would be no more jobs that were part-time, no more bosses with only a dime. I would not play life as a game sometimes, the game of life would be played full-time. I feel like I am now in life at halftime, guess it is time to play it like I am in overtime. Date: 10/7/2019 Written Third Place    10/14/2019   If only we could turn back the hands of time   Contest Judged:  10/14/2019   Sponsored by: Silent One  If Only We Could Turn Back The Hands Of Time

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Date: 10/24/2019 1:34:00 PM
I'm with you on that last guess! Overtime -- but with all the excitement of overtime in a sports contest(!) -- as opposed to the mere money of joy-killing overtime at work. Smiles, Gershon
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/25/2019 9:47:00 AM
Yes, overtime with fun. No, overtime for work. Have fun writing..............
Date: 10/15/2019 10:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in this contest my friend....
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/15/2019 12:03:00 PM
Thank You, for reading and writing. It is great to hear from other writers. Enjoy your day writing........
Date: 10/15/2019 3:44:00 AM
Congrats and Blessings always, Love, Gina
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/15/2019 12:01:00 PM
Thank You, for your note. It is great to hear from other writers. Enjoy your day...................
Date: 10/14/2019 12:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/14/2019 12:51:00 PM
Thanks for your e-mail. You made my day. I did not know anything about this placement.
Date: 10/10/2019 8:59:00 AM
Good one...100 years ago you would have been on overtime or in departure lounge...but today life's much longer...
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/10/2019 5:47:00 PM
Glad you like it. It was fun to write......

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