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If Only I Could Go

If only I could go where no one would know about where or who I am. If only I could go where the wind gently blows like my mother's hair in the wind. If only I could go where it is peaceful and tranquil and doubts melt like lemon drops. If only I could go To an amazing kaleidoscope of colour and joy. If only I could go where my spirit can run free like a wild horse in the west. If only I could go where no one would know about where or who I am. -Millie Cooper.

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Date: 6/21/2017 2:13:00 AM
Sometimes we all want to go and start over again. Great poem Millie. Just read your comment to Chris.... good luck in your school competition. : )
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Millie Cooper
Date: 6/21/2017 1:30:00 PM
Thank you. It took absolutely ages! ( and I was bored during English)
Date: 6/20/2017 2:32:00 PM
I believe many of us feel just like this at times. Nicely crafted Millie.
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Millie Cooper
Date: 6/21/2017 2:05:00 AM
Thank you very much Chris. It is for a competition at school, the John Betchman Cup and I am going to enter this, so I am glad you like it

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