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If only you knew what i am going through I cant tell at this moement how much i need you If only you knew You were rhythm of my flute Day you left music of my life turned mute If only you knew i was crazy for your smile That i forgot mine when you disappeared for a while. if only you knew words in my silence you would have known the pain of this distance. if only you knew how to read my eyes you would have detected the truth behind the lies.

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Date: 4/12/2017 3:58:00 AM
Hello Akanksha, love this your poem. simple and deep. if you can edit "Day you left music of my life turned mute" to "Day you left music of my life turned mute" beautiful lines be the way
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Akanksha Somani
Date: 4/12/2017 4:06:00 AM
Thanks a lot Ibrahim. yes i will edit it if only you can clarify what changes you want.

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