If Only

If only you knew
what i am going through
I cant tell at this moement
how much i need you

If only you knew
You were rhythm of my flute
Day you left music 
of my life turned mute

If only you knew 
i was crazy for your smile
That i forgot mine when
you disappeared for a while.

if only you knew
words in my silence
you would have known
the pain of this distance.

if only you knew
how to read my eyes
you would have detected
the truth behind the lies.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Bashiru Avatar
April 12, 2017 at 3:58 AM
Hello Akanksha, love this your poem. simple and deep. if you can edit "Day you left music of my life turned mute" to "Day you left music of my life turned mute" beautiful lines be the way
Somani Avatar
April 12, 2017 at 4:06 AM
Thanks a lot Ibrahim. yes i will edit it if only you can clarify what changes you want.
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