If Only

I've got eyes wide open like candlelight 
But I can't tame the fire in my eyes. 
my mind is a jigsaw and you keep throwing in pieces 
I don't have the time to put them together now.
I'm too tired to go to sleep
my eyes are burning, my thoughts are in overdrive
I want to dream, but when I close my eyes I will think of you
I breathe in stale air to an angry throat 
and song lyrics twist around the jigsaw pieces, 
coating them in a sweet blanket of confusion and self pity.
Oh why can't everything be pretty.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Sivey Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 7:43 PM
High imagery, very nicely written!
Haigh Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 6:28 PM
Thankyou Russell (got your name right this time) I shall read yours in a moment x
Falotico Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 5:43 PM
Strong feelings all throughout.... very nice poetry..
Haigh Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 6:28 PM
Thankyou Michael! Happy writing x
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