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An endless sky surrounds us, a view for all to see when darkness shines upon its veil the stars play endlessly. Lighting up a brand new path, to twinkle in the sky playing guess the galaxy without ever wondering why. Lying there beneath the night, a partner at your side only still and silence hears the secrets you confide. If only life were like this night, when happiness felt real then all the wounds that hurt so deep wouldn’t take so long to heal. 9-17-19

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Date: 7/14/2020 9:39:00 PM
Like your style. You kept it real and did not sugar coat too much. Some pieces are better being left in natural state. About right length with words well chosen to give the right message for the reader to reexamine some aspects of life. Best regards David in NZ
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Jessica Thompson
Date: 8/7/2020 8:45:00 PM
Thank you David for you kind words. I am glad you stopped by and left a reply. Wish you well and hope you have wonderful week. Thanks again. jess
Date: 11/5/2019 2:36:00 PM
Another great write Jess!
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Jessica Thompson
Date: 11/30/2019 1:38:00 PM
Thank you Pace, very kind of you Jess
Date: 10/29/2019 6:04:00 PM
Jessica, somone once wrote, Affliction is but the shadow of God's wing.
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Jessica Thompson
Date: 10/29/2019 10:23:00 PM
That is actually pretty beautiful..ty for sharing Lunita

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