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If My Love

If my love were an ocean, there would be no more land. If my love were a desert, you would see only sand. If my love were a star- late at night, only light. And if my love could grow wings, I'd be soaring in flight.

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Juliet Ligon

Date: 5/3/2018 10:54:00 PM

What a boundless love! Nicely done!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/3/2018 7:49:00 PM

This poem is pure and uplifting. Nice touches all the way around, Donna.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/3/2018 5:47:00 PM

Hello Donna, a beautiful written love poem. Have a nice evening my friend.

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 4/10/2018 12:32:00 PM

Oh it s a really beautifully written poem, really enjoyed reading this one,your poem shows that how much you love your partner, he/she is lucky to have a partner like you. A very warm welcome to poetrysoup, I m sure that you re gonna love your stay here, good luck and continue to write

Donna Ahsinger
Date: 4/21/2018 6:25:00 AM

I'm late in saying Thank You, my apologies, took me a little while to figure out this site. I enjoyed your poetry specially, "The Day I Met You". She's lucky to have you and I wish the both of you the best.