If My Love

If my love were an ocean,
there would be no more land.
If my love were a desert,
you would see only sand.
If my love were a star-
late at night,
only light.
And if my love could grow wings,
I'd be soaring in flight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ligon Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 10:54 PM
What a boundless love! Nicely done!
Krutsinger Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 7:49 PM
This poem is pure and uplifting. Nice touches all the way around, Donna.
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 5:47 PM
Hello Donna, a beautiful written love poem. Have a nice evening my friend.
Ajmal Avatar
April 10, 2018 at 12:32 PM
Oh it s a really beautifully written poem, really enjoyed reading this one,your poem shows that how much you love your partner, he/she is lucky to have a partner like you. A very warm welcome to poetrysoup, I m sure that you re gonna love your stay here, good luck and continue to write
Ahsinger Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 6:25 AM
I'm late in saying Thank You, my apologies, took me a little while to figure out this site. I enjoyed your poetry specially, "The Day I Met You". She's lucky to have you and I wish the both of you the best.
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