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If My Inner World

if my inner world

  binds one light with moons in space...

          I must be their child



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Haiku on Probabilities Contest
Sponsor: Marvin Celestial
by nette onclaud

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Scott Thirtyseven

August 11, 2014 at 9:43 AM

Wonderful, congrats on making the winners list.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

August 11, 2014 at 8:11 AM

Wow love the way u took it,, connecting self with universe, great ! Congrats on big win!

David Mohn

August 9, 2014 at 11:06 AM

I love the "we are all stardust" feel of this Nette...beautiful

Mohan Chutani

August 9, 2014 at 11:02 AM

congrats for the lovely Haiku win, Nette.

Pandita Sietesantos

August 9, 2014 at 9:41 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful win, Nette. I enjoyed reading this beautiful haiku. Excellent write! Pandita

Casarah Nance

August 9, 2014 at 9:10 AM

Unique and beautiful! Grats on your win :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 8, 2014 at 9:53 PM

Deep and meaningful haiku. congrats. nette

Robert Lindley

August 8, 2014 at 8:29 PM

Big congrats on this write my friend. Congrats on the win!!

Andrea Dietrich

August 8, 2014 at 7:01 PM

so glad to see this on the top ten list. It was one of the best. Congratulations.

Jan Allison

August 8, 2014 at 6:32 PM

fabulous Haiku congrats on a great win:-) Hugs jan xx

Donna Jones

August 8, 2014 at 2:42 PM

I do believe you are a child of a special universe...wonderful nett.....PS..I've missed being around nd you too.....granny gran is still holding her own and my garden going crazy!!!!!

Andrea Dietrich

August 6, 2014 at 6:57 PM

wow, I had not caught this one before either. One of the best I have seen in this particular contest.

Bl Devnath

August 1, 2014 at 12:08 PM

very nice haiku of inner world enjoyed. Good luck in the contest. Loved always,bl

Poet Destroyer A

July 29, 2014 at 6:43 PM

Nette, , Love the scenario .... Enjoyed the Haiku.... LINDA

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

July 29, 2014 at 12:12 AM

That is so good to know you are all right, save for your rooftop, basta ingat kayo lagi-- kami, mga puno namin ang napuruhan. Ulan na naman ng ulan ngayon, buti walang pasok! Really like the thoughts you put in this haiku, makes me think-- for some reason, I am now thinking of Annie, what's that song "Maybe" I know, medyo malayo, yours is deeper in meaning, in a universal way-- you definitely have your way with words! Sending hugs!