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If My Inner World

if my inner world

  binds one light with moons in space...

          I must be their child



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Haiku on Probabilities Contest
Sponsor: Marvin Celestial
by nette onclaud

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Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 8/11/2014 9:43:00 AM

Wonderful, congrats on making the winners list.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/11/2014 8:11:00 AM

Wow love the way u took it,, connecting self with universe, great ! Congrats on big win!

David Mohn

Date: 8/9/2014 11:06:00 AM

I love the "we are all stardust" feel of this Nette...beautiful

Mohan Chutani

Date: 8/9/2014 11:02:00 AM

congrats for the lovely Haiku win, Nette.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/9/2014 9:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful win, Nette. I enjoyed reading this beautiful haiku. Excellent write! Pandita

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/9/2014 9:10:00 AM

Unique and beautiful! Grats on your win :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/8/2014 9:53:00 PM

Deep and meaningful haiku. congrats. nette

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/8/2014 8:29:00 PM

Big congrats on this write my friend. Congrats on the win!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/8/2014 7:01:00 PM

so glad to see this on the top ten list. It was one of the best. Congratulations.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/8/2014 6:32:00 PM

fabulous Haiku congrats on a great win:-) Hugs jan xx

Donna Jones

Date: 8/8/2014 2:42:00 PM

I do believe you are a child of a special universe...wonderful nett.....PS..I've missed being around nd you too.....granny gran is still holding her own and my garden going crazy!!!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/6/2014 6:57:00 PM

wow, I had not caught this one before either. One of the best I have seen in this particular contest.

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/1/2014 12:08:00 PM

very nice haiku of inner world enjoyed. Good luck in the contest. Loved always,bl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/29/2014 6:43:00 PM

Nette, , Love the scenario .... Enjoyed the Haiku.... LINDA

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/29/2014 12:12:00 AM

That is so good to know you are all right, save for your rooftop, basta ingat kayo lagi-- kami, mga puno namin ang napuruhan. Ulan na naman ng ulan ngayon, buti walang pasok! Really like the thoughts you put in this haiku, makes me think-- for some reason, I am now thinking of Annie, what's that song "Maybe" I know, medyo malayo, yours is deeper in meaning, in a universal way-- you definitely have your way with words! Sending hugs!

Rhoma Em

Date: 7/25/2014 12:43:00 PM

How divine! A lot of insight with spiritual thoughts as well as giving off a sense of connection with all things. Thank you for enlightening me.

Poet Tacito

Date: 7/23/2014 11:09:00 AM

Amen to that! :)

Norma Arana

Date: 7/23/2014 10:08:00 AM

If you can convey this sense of unity with all worlds here and beyond, you are surely a child of the universe. Supreme poem from your eternal pen!

Frederic Parker

Date: 7/22/2014 5:13:00 PM

and if that child ponders the mysteries of the universe would she find the answers she seeks?...my first thought after reading your wonderful haiku

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/22/2014 4:10:00 PM

Sweet moon child ,this is an exceptional haiku!!!

Gabby Sabre

Date: 7/22/2014 4:03:00 PM

I really think you are the female version of Edgar Cayce or Tesla. This poem is way above the sky. Divine and out-of -this world, Nette. Clap, clap!