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if looks could

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                   she stood 
        'tween thuh kilderkinz 
                hern pierce’n
                       gaze
                       az if
            familiar with mine
                 indifference

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Sara Kendrick

November 19, 2025 at 3:42 AM

I am sure that most women are familiar with indifference. LOL.. Creative work. Sara K.. I had to look up kilderkinz (meaning a contain that is half of a beer barrel in size)

James Peranteau

November 19, 2025 at 5:09 AM

') i can attest to that sara...notice thuh pneuma i spill 'bout...likewise sara, it ticklez me to hear readerz indulging thuh dictionary...A reminder dear poet; "many werdz which i use in mine writes are from lexiconz uv yore...therefore, if'n yuh stutter through a write uv mine, look up "etymology" uv sum uv thuh werdz...oh, it'll make sense forthward ") who luvz ya

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