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If Into Each Life

a little rain falls why is my life a monsoon with all paths flooded

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/4/2009 9:06:00 AM
I really love the last line of this. I like poetic sadness when it's asked in the form of a question. I think there is a little more hope left in the person as opposed to saying it in a statement. Nice senryu to hopefully be featured!
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