If Into Each Life

a little rain falls
why is my life a monsoon
with all paths flooded
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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September 4, 2009 at 9:06 AM
I really love the last line of this. I like poetic sadness when it's asked in the form of a question. I think there is a little more hope left in the person as opposed to saying it in a statement. Nice senryu to hopefully be featured!
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