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If I Were Your Brother-I Would

If I were your brother and you took ALL my candies treats; You would have eaten, half no ALL of my candy that wouldn’t be sweet; You see sometime you’ll have to close your eyes and go asleep; I would creep into our room and stick needles in your feet; I would take a cup of Karo syrup pour on your eyes; I would take a gallon of water spill all over your bed now you rise; I would get the sack of flour and pour it on ya I would snicker and giggle ha ha ha! I would place the wrappers of those candy treats; Throw them all over your sheets, bet you won't ever again eat my treats; If I were your brother I wouldn’t tell dad or mother I jest git even…ha ha ha ha ha! Ooh!! MAMA!!! Joe Joe wet on himself and look at the mess he’s made;
10/28/19 #2 Placement Win in Contest Written by James Edward Lee Sr. © If I were your brother Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Bobby May
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Macfarlane Avatar
November 2, 2019 at 9:22 AM
Great write and revenge! Congrats on your win James. Hugs
Adams Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 7:18 PM
lol...wow, that's getting even...great poem, congrats on your win :)
Allison Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 6:04 PM
what a super story James, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 9:47 AM
- Congratulations on your wonderful poem, in this fun contest James :) - I enjoy reading your story :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 8:52 AM
Congratulations on your win my friend!
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